nothing works

I try to tell

I try to do

And I still get ignored

I scream so loud

You never hear

Is this a curse?!

I want to be with you

You can’t even see

Now I’m going back to my old routine

Let us go

Away

From this city

You can always drive

And ill take you anywhere

Dear, I just wanted to get away.

 

Author's Note

just amde it up !:) hope you like it !:)

Reviews

[Raven Starhawk]

Some of your lines hit me because I can closely relate. Sometimes it feels as if the whole world is against you, ignoring you and at times running away seems like the only solution. I know sometimes getting away does seem to be a good thing. ^^* But also fighting back is another option I am willing to take if the situation is worth fighting for.

[Daniel88Batson]

This poem really works.
The short sentences make it seem so desperate.
Nice write.
"Like"

[Daytonight]

I can so relate to being ignored and wanting to get away from everything else so maybe they will focus on you for a change. Well done.

[Tasha]

This is so relateable. Being ignored and wanting to go away from it all. I've felt this way many times before. This was amazing, you did a fantastic job.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Just Cat]

Oh so retable! Being ignored, wanting to scream, wanting to just go away from it all. Ugh, I think we've all felt like this at some point in our lives.
You wrote this very well. An enjoyable piece.
:)

[FemmeSpookyCorpse]

This is a great piece...a little bit saddening, but very nice at the same time! You used great descriptions...nice work = ]

-Femme_Gothique (Brittany)

[Kenneth The Poet]

Reminds me of a couple of country songs I've heard in recent years.

You are talented, brenda.

[Raindrop]

I know what you mean and I can really relate..a lot of us can. Nothing more than just..life. :) I love it!

[Muse]

I can't tell you how often I want to drive away from it all, but then there's reality. Well penned!

[Becky C Strukamp]

I know what that feeling is like, the wanting to get away. You penned those emotions well.

[nevermindfan1991]

This is great. I've felt this way before, feeling ignored no matter how loud I scream. I enjoyed reading! It was relatable, not only that it was beautifully written! Great job!