Sweet Kisses

Sweet Kisses

A Poem by babyblue
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It's about how passionate you feel towards a person you hurt during a time before you realized you loved that person allot,and now you regret what you did to break this persons heart,and now all you want is to make up with this person,and just kiss him.So

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Sweet Kisses

By Ivonne L.

I've just been living my life and getting high. My love life don't matter,my age it means less.For I haven't had a sweet kiss in awhile.

The passion I'm hiding aw no tongue can tell.Through many dark lonely weeks I've been thinking about you,and how I've betrayed you with my sweet kisses.

Thou that happened a long time ago when we were lovers.Now we're just friends,yet I still can't get over the fact That i screwed up. Oh how I miss your sweet kisses.

oh how I wish i could take it all back. Just so I can have your sweet kisses. this time I promise I won't betray you with my sweet kisses. For you can have my sweet kisses.

As long as I can own your sweet kisses.My heart is yours to keep,and I promise this time my sweet kisses Will only mean love.This time for reals.


© 2009 babyblue



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fix your spaces after every comma and period in these lines....

I've just been living my life,and getting high. My love life don't matter,my age it means

less.For I haven't had a sweet kiss in awhile.

The passion I'm hiding aw no tongue can tell.Through many dark lonely weeks I've been

thinking about you,and how I've betrayed you with my sweet kisses.


Thou that happened a long time ago when we were lovers,now we're just friends.Yet I

As long as I can own your sweet kisses.My heart is yours to keep,and I promise this time my sweet kisses Will only mean love.This time for reals.


capitalize your I in this line---still can't get over the fact That i screwed up. Oh how I miss your sweet kisses.


and reals isnt a word...its real---This time for reals.

Posted 9 Years Ago


this was really good. You could have used the words "sweet kisses" a little less but other then that this was really sad and sweet. great job

Posted 9 Years Ago


aww very sweet.

Posted 10 Years Ago


A poem of regret and longing for what you once had. Honest write from your heart.

"As long as I can own your sweet kisses.My heart is yours to
keep,and I promise this time my sweet kisses Will only mean
love.This time for reals."

I hope you can get back what you had.
Thank you for submitting this to my "Chance to Shine" contest ~ Helena



Posted 10 Years Ago


Well I have to say "sweet kisses" are worth keeping or remembering. Your not going to find that with everybody for sure. Enjoyed reading this poem and thanks for entering it into the Missing Him, Missing Her contest.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on December 25, 2008
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El paso, TX



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Hey my names ivonne i'm 19 I wirte stores,and poems i go to college . I like scremo,punk,and classic rock bands such as bob marley bob dylan underoath,sliverstian,misfits,daed kenadys,the door,and t.. more..

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