Nature's Wicked Joke

Nature's Wicked Joke

A Poem by Kimberly "Melody" Carney

Nature’s wicked joke

 

Shattered glass

In beveled my body

Black crows

Peck heartlessly

At my mind

 

Nature’s wicked joke

 

My womb!

It’s my womb!

 

A child it craves!

 

Only to cradle

A tiny beating heart

For thirty-one days

 

My tears burns

 

My soul bleeds

 

As a dream is ripped from me

 

Shattered glass

In beveled my body

Black crows

Peck heartlessly

At my mind

 

Nature’s wicked joke

 

 

 

 

© 2012 Kimberly "Melody" Carney


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wow

Posted 11 Years Ago


A powerful and sad tale in this poem. To lose a child is a lifetime pain. The poem was direct and the use of the language gave strength and purpose to this poem. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this poem is so potent. speaks volumes about the torture of having a child and ultimately loosing it to cot death, so unfortunate. you expressed it well.

Posted 11 Years Ago



The nature of child bearing and
childbirth is , or can be torture, but
the loss of the child is beyond endurance.
Your poem is a relentless espose of the
child bearing process with it`s heartbreak
and record endurance.
---- John

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Kimberly "Melody" Carney
Kimberly "Melody" Carney

Denver, CO



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