Soundly

Soundly

A Poem by leinahtan
"

z z z z z z z z z . . .

"

s l e e p i n g soundly on my left arm,

still and calm with all her charm.

Yet her breathing sounds so right.

The morning may bring a cold, cold light

but I swear i'll hold her tight even if I die.

Even if it kills me--i'll be  s t i l l .

babe, i will stay awake and for your sake,

make sure your s e r e n i t y won't break.

Even if it would take me away,

I am here to stay

and  p r a y  for this hour to n e v e r end

this moment, I s h a l l fight and defend.


i  s h a l l . . .



© 2011 leinahtan


Author's Note

leinahtan
stay tuned for the 2nd and 3rd stanza.
don't deem me unkind, the words are hard to find. tsk tsk tsk

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This is a keeper of a write, love the vivid emotions.
Like the writing style as well. Amazing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is awesome really, love the set up and style. Wonderful write as well.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I love your writing style. (:

Posted 7 Years Ago


A beautiful poem of love. Last line is true. When the love is good. Try to make the moment last forever. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


its amazing! i love it for whoever its written for they are very lucky!

xoxoxo
~inday!
100/100

Posted 7 Years Ago



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leinahtan
leinahtan

Lapu-Lapu , Cebu, Philippines



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