our memories

just thinking about today, the future, and the past.. and then i get this idea..

today is a challenge

and the future is a mystery 

what somethings beautiful and wonderful that we have?

the answer is our past 

our memories

although that the terrible memories

although that a memories that you want to forget

there must be something beautiful hidden

never think to walk back pass through the time

because we cant made it

just learn to don't make the same mistake twice

and of course we have a memories 

that we want to be there forever

that why i told to you

our memories are our treasures 

when you cant handle the challenge 

or you cant solve the mystery

just relax and think about your past

Author's Note

sorry if i use wrong word or my grammar is terrible..
what do you think about this, friends?

Reviews

[Andile]

you should improve in your grammar and punctuation but your poem is good. l will give you 99 so that you can surprise me next time.

[Spookers]

This is good, and i can see were your grammer is getting better jus.t from the last poem i read

[Jetta Zippora]

Very beautiful, friend. I love it. The words flow and create a soothing picture. I have many great memories that I look back on to comfort myself when I'm not happy with the present. I very much like your writing. :)

[Denis K.]

I should say that this poem is pretty good :) btw, I like the roxas picture :)

[Irvette Dauphine]

thanks~
at the pic there is a text "memories", but cant see that because the pic is too small

[The dark story]

"our memories are our treasures ".i sorely liked this line....filled with reality.......and the concept is great too...you really put a very deep and nice message in it.good work!!!!

[Irvette Dauphine]

thanks~

[The Flame of the Knight]

It would be good, if the errors were fixed. But I still like it. I can see the potential in this.

[Irvette Dauphine]

i'll fix it, can you help me?? :/

[Junert]

The errors couldn't let the message come out well.

[Irvette Dauphine]

okay.. :/
i'll fix it then..

[corvus]

really nice and well written!! I really liked it =)

[Irvette Dauphine]

thanks~

[corvus]

no problem =)

[Irvette Dauphine]

can you read my other new poem and also my books?
waiting for your review :)

[Irvette Dauphine]

*new poems

[corvus]

sure

[Mazie Tackett]

you did wonderful on this poem

[Irvette Dauphine]

thanks~

[Mazie Tackett]

your welcome