Conflicted

Hug
Drug
Shrug
Love
Lie
Cry
Truth
Deny
Deceive
Believe
My heart
On sleeve
Accept?
Reject
Hopeless
Desire
On fire
Perfect?
Reject
I love
U shove
Denial
Exile
Unwanted
Persuaded
To leave me
Lost; faded.
Commit to
True feeling
Misguided
Left reeling..

Author's Note

Experimental style. Please please if u took the time to read it, leave a review. It will only take a few more seconds :)

Reviews

[Wynter Ignatius]

Minimalist in design yet speaks to the chaotic mind we all have at least at one point in our lives and often never rid ourselves of. Reminds me of many things in my past especially my high school years (a dark time for me but isn't that everyone in some way?).

I like it - reminds me of some of my works and my more angst ridden pieces.

[Norma M Sutton]

Interesting style. Love is more a decision then a feeling. Feeling ebb and flow, decisions are more concrete.

[Joanna Johnson]

oooo i like this one. Very good!

[creativequill]

I love this style of writing, I am a big fan of one and two word lines and utilize it in a lot of my writing. I find that those small pieces are just as strong, if not stronger, as long lines of prose. This was magnetic, you can feel the heartbreak and anger in the words, the passion of pouring yourself into something, and giving everything, to be denied, it's intense, and beautiful. Experimental success!