first love

first love

A Poem by LynLee

First Love



I couldn't believe it,

he had said the words,

and typed the words,

All I could do was sit there,


like a statue in a snow storm,

my body grew numb,

what do I say?,

What do I do?,

Do I love him back?,

Is any of this true?

I could only think of one thing to do,

I walked.

I walked to him,

I stood in front of him,

I pulled him to me,

And I said,

"I love you too.''

© 2010 LynLee

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that is good that really is realy good it shows they feelings

Posted 8 Years Ago

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... this is as beautiful as a drizzle ... as beautiful as the sea breeze ... as beautiful as the view of sunrise in the mountains ... it's so magical ... gorgeous poem ... so lovingly written ... i'll never forget it ... :) ...

Posted 8 Years Ago

Awe! That's adorable love, sweet and simple. Great job!


Posted 8 Years Ago

awwww this is coo cutee.. I love it..very well written huns keep it up :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

Wonderful; it's short, simple, and to the point. No sense beating around the bush when you can risk it all and gain so much more. Your how-to attitude should be bronzed and then admired. Nicely done.

Posted 8 Years Ago

His is very well done. I believe that everyone feels this way once in their life, struggling on whether they love someone or not, whether to say it back or not. Great job!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Very sweet and beautiful. Nice work!

Posted 8 Years Ago

This is really cute! It reminds me of a simpler time. I can honestly say this made me smile a real smile for the first time in awhile. Thank you. It's lovely!

Posted 8 Years Ago

This poem is, absolutely, beautiful and so well written. It is a treasure that I will be keeping in my library. Beautiful, just beautiful, simply beautiful!

Posted 8 Years Ago

well written a very honest piece well done

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Last Updated on May 19, 2010



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