The Maze

The Maze

A Poem by Einstein Noodle

The Maze
frenetic winds like contrails 
whispering through the chambers
one man
one woman
turning twisting reaching
                                      rising 
falling 
hips sway lips say
unknown  -   invisible need moans  -
'round corners of unadorned halls                                                                           
virgin 
empty quiet apprehensions of
two minds tumbled out of a spin cycle
set at opposites 
THE DOOR! 
18 yr old boy ... 16 yr. old girl ...... 
facing flint and steel sparks in an instant fade from fire yet
deepening molten embers glow
true light to pierce the time
3/31/2019
E.
Image result for endless stairs painting
Escher's inspired stairs

© 2019 Einstein Noodle


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I dunno why but I just come over all emotional, and that aint like me.. I was hoping I might find something new from ya Gene, and blimey.. some find.. this must surely rank among my favourite poems of yours my friend... bloomin well done might sound like a cliche methinks, but tis part of me now and I sincerely mean, bloomin well done... Maybe I am beginning to feel my years and hanker after moments past.. but you sure got me this mane.... Am bound to revisit this page over and over... Neville :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

thanks Neville ... your the brother i never had ;) and i am very happy this one has gone to the top .. read more
Neville Pettitt

1 Month Ago

all those things back at ya Gene and true..... and yes.. you do have a unique style & what a pleasur.. read more


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what I get from this is not sadness at all - it's life - natural young experimental urges.

its a funny thing the evolution of sex when one allows it - teenage sex is always so quick and fumble - the ability to turn that into something rather transcendental is firstly a want and desire to explore (in my opinion) I read a fact a while back that most women, when they have sex, don't orgasm - when I read that I said 'WHAT!!!' to me unbelievable. its the learning how to give, the learning how to fall right back and receive which leads us to those moments that lead us to glimpses of the eternal.

Oh dear and now I am thinking of my two teenage sons - each with their respective girlfriends - oh dear!!!

Love you always XXX this review was clearly a digression - but hey ho - what to do!

Posted 1 Day Ago


Interesting write but kind of sad. I enjoyed

Posted 3 Days Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Days Ago

can you expand on the sadness you felt? i am curious about that, Cassie ...
E.
understanding your forst sensual emotions is indeed like finding your way through a maze, never quite knowing the right way forward and feeling unsure as to the rising heat that drives you on ... until, the damn bursts and the first real afterglow is the path you were inadvertently seeking..

Posted 1 Week Ago


Stella Armour

1 Week Ago

if only we could have the wisdom of age in our youth ... would that not be a wonderful thing?
Einstein Noodle

1 Week Ago

i'm not so sure about that Stella ...might take all the fun out of it :))))))))))))))))))))))))) lik.. read more
Stella Armour

1 Week Ago

Hahaha ... maybe &(*.*)&
it is one hell of an emotional writing.. the confusion the doubting and the learning along the way makes it an interesting read

Posted 1 Week Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Week Ago

oh how we stumble along the love raod don't we sette? ... what a great review .. thank you for takin.. read more
Wow ! Neville isn't the only one awe strucked.. Perfect poem and Music combo. Put me right where you wanted us. I felt enchantedly at another place and time With my first Love.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Week Ago

ohhhhhhh my luv, Cryin' Kate!!!! i am so happy to see your here! at the Cafe' ..on me pages once aga.. read more
Honestly. ... emotive for the strangest reasons. ... I didn't hear echoes of my own love-past. .... but imagined my mother and birth-father.
The ages are right... however their light did not pierce time... it shone until I was 2.
Emotive write my friend.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Week Ago

not from your own echoes?? but emotive ...how very interesting indeed Sharon .. there is much more t.. read more
sharonlee

1 Week Ago

No I've never really been inpired or pulled in that direction... my own echoes of love I have, of co.. read more
Einstein Noodle

1 Week Ago

ahahaha i have lots of those imagined :} love on ya Sharon!!
so difficult to navigate love and such when so young
i love the flow and dance of this. I think you've touched on something that creates deep feelings within the reader, remembering...

Posted 1 Week Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Week Ago

thanks for reviewing Ana! so nice to see you 'round this ol' Cafe' :) that's kind of the place this .. read more
Ana Papaya

1 Week Ago

:) you're welcome and it's good to see you too (:
Memory lane of youth who went through the motions and emotions. I love how you narrate the story and feed us with great wisdom lessons. How things change and evolve! How the maze is unknown and then is solved! Memory can indeed pierce the time and go through the emotions. Your style sir is original and unique.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Weeks Ago

Wow! You are good. . You are welcome.
Einstein Noodle

3 Weeks Ago

you are very kind Sami! thank you.
Sami Khalil

3 Weeks Ago

::: )))))))))))))
Young love and intimacy just isn't what it used to be... is it E? I am so wrapped in the essence of this! swoon~~~~

Posted 1 Month Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

oh my goodness ... i am feeling me cheeks warming and turning red :) so very gratified this affected.. read more
Even tho this is about "young love" . . . it could be about any age love. I love the way you use the artwork & theme of "maze" to describe how tangled up it can feel. I am catching a hint of danger here, as well as the simmering passions. I hate to say this, but I had a fleeting moment when I was thinking of two young lovers in a crowded place with multiple floors/stairs, torn between the attraction they have for each other & then having that moment ripped apart by a mass shooting. It's so sad that this is so top-of-mind these days, I can't even read a poem without having it cross my mind! But I'm more likely to read "danger" as being the unpredictability of young love, not a mass shooting! I love your writing & the way you use single-word lines for emphasis (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Month Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

oh my goodness Margie!!! your comments speak to the atrocities in the news are way too many .. with .. read more

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