Yours Merry Day

Yours Merry Day

A Poem by Raj Sahu
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This is a wish for the birthday of a special one of poet.

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And here the day comes,
Full of joy and mirth.
Such events betimes rare,
When legends takes birth.

Here this meek poet,
Mere with his paper and pen;
Can bestow blissful blessings,
Only to the image he ken.

O God! Shower your drops
Of boons and benefactions.
Pour down your gifts in his life
And lave him with your protection.'

Enjoy your day, my mate;
And leave no stone unturned-
To achieve an astounding aim
For which you are too concerned.


© 2017 Raj Sahu



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I don't know many poets who achieve "legend" status. Few are those who are even known in their own lifetimes. So many like John Donne and Emily Dickinson are only known after their deaths. I doubt there are many people who could even name two poet laureates of the United States like Richard Wilbur who just passed away just this October at the age of 96. But I do hope your friend reads this touching honor and tribute.

Posted 11 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

10 Months Ago

He's not a legend of poetry, but the legend of my heart. Thank you for your words!



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that put a smile on my face.. I liked it so much. you have an amazing way with words

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

4 Months Ago

Thank you!
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I'm reading this seven days after my birthday. LOL

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Months Ago

Oh! Wish you belated happy birthday. Thank you for your review.
a lovely wish for your friends b'day love this
he is lucky to have a mate like you good work

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much.
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This is a touching, and beautiful birthday tribute.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Months Ago

Thank you.
This is a great way to wish someone a happy birthday! I definitely wish my friends would do this. Great poem and I can tell you must like this person. Great work!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Months Ago

Thanks a lot.
Beautiful tribute...well told.....

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Months Ago

Thank you.
it is a creative writing and i truly enjoyed reading it

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Months Ago

Thank you.
What a great read, really enjoyed your style, and I enjoyed each stanza more and more as I read. Thank you very much for sharing this piece

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much.
Well, this definitely takes the cake for the best birthday poem I've ever read!! There are many things I like about this. Your use of language, the colors you chose for the font, your effective use of figurative language, and just the overall message of the piece. This poem is simple in meaning, but the way it's conveyed is powerful. Great job!! :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Months Ago

Thank you from the core of my heart.
Deep wishes in four stanzas...,amazing!! Nice read😊

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Months Ago

Thank you!

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Added on November 27, 2017
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Raj Sahu
Raj Sahu

Burhanpur, Madhya Pradesh, India



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Hello everyone. Myself Raj Sahu, a 17-year-old boy who is a servant of the God until his last breath. I write poems and thinks that in future I will try other writings too. I also love reading. My fav.. more..

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