Goldie the Goldfish

Goldie the Goldfish

A Poem by Raj Sahu
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An emotional poem for my pet Goldie the Goldfish.

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You are the charm of my little bowl,
Your skin and scale so orange
Like a pleasing sunset. I extol
your charm that no one can challenge.

I am happy as a clam,
whenever I struck with your glance,
Even during my toughest exam,
Seeing you means my luck is enhanced.

I love how you eat
Like a bird feeds on seeds.
How can I forget your sweet
water bubbles which everybody heeds.

O, Goldie! You are the precious part of my kin,
"Don't ever leave me", came a voice from within.

© 2018 Raj Sahu


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Author's Note

Raj Sahu
You would fall in love with her on the very first sight!

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Very cute poem, and just from your description in this one I can just imagine how much joy Goldie must bring you.
"You are the charm of my little bowl,
Your skin and scale so orange
Like a pleasing sunset. I extol
your charm that no one can challenge."
That first stanza starts this one off great here, and I loved this poem. Good job!


Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Year Ago

Thanks a lot!



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you have a lot of writing talent, an enjoyable read.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much!
I could never keep a gold fish alive or a plant.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is so cute and sweet! The joy of a pet is such a human experience that each of us need in our lives

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Year Ago

Thank you.
Aw, this is so sweet, tender and nicely done. Enjoyed reading your poem about Goldie.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Year Ago

Thank you.
Dawn

1 Year Ago

your very welcome
Your wet pet sounds like your lucky charm and a whole lot more ..delightful. She has my vote..

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Raj Sahu

1 Year Ago

Thank you!
You really expressed beautiful what you feel for her. I like and enjoyed it. Pet always give happiness and bring smile on our face.

My favourite lines are:
I am happy as a clam,...Seeing you means my luck is enhanced.

Thanks for sharing and Keep writing! : )


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Year Ago

Thanks a lot. ☺
This is adorably presented. I never thought of loving a goldfish. I love this.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much.
Wow! you are so totally in love with your goldie and can't seem to praise her enough. Cute poem showing the innocent way you love your pet.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much.
This is adorable! I loved it. Write more poems lke this. I really enjoyed how well you describe everything. Keep it up :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much.
A touching representation of love that lives and breathes in us all, well done, good read.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Year Ago

Thank you.

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Added on May 5, 2018
Last Updated on May 6, 2018
Tags: Pet, Goldfish, Love, Care

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Raj Sahu
Raj Sahu

Burhanpur, Madhya Pradesh, India



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Myself Raj Sahu from the historic town of Burhanpur, Madhya Pradesh, India. I had completed my high schooling with flying colours from Choithram School, Indore in Humanities stream and was first in or.. more..

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