the secrets of a regretful youth

the secrets of a regretful youth

A Poem by just take a breath

dear mama
im sorry i failed that test

dear daddy
im sorry i pushed you away

dear knife
im sorry i put you in my wrists

dear drugs
im sorry i overdosed

dear friends
im sorry i changed

dear love
im sorry i trusted you


© 2010 just take a breath


Author's Note

just take a breath
BTW. this isnt about me. this is about someone whom is very close to me. but shes getting help :)

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We are the clouds that veil the midnight moon;
How restlessly they speed, and gleam, and quiver,
Streaking the darkness radiantly!--yet soon
Night closes round, and they are lost forever:

Or like forgotten lyres, whose dissonant strings
Give various response to each varying blast,
To whose frail frame no second motion brings
One mood or modulation like the last.

We rest.--A dream has power to poison sleep;
We rise.--One wandering thought pollutes the day;
We feel, conceive or reason, laugh or weep;
Embrace fond foe, or cast our cares away:

It is the same!--For, be it joy or sorrow,
The path of its departure still is free:
Man's yesterday may ne'er be like his morrow;
Nought may endure but Mutability.

~ Percy Byshee Shelly.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Thanks for sharing. Sorry, but this has the same effect as reality tv-it makes me feel good about myself. But with a poetic eye I have to say its an interesting poem. Good job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


No doubt big regrets. We all have regrets, but some of these regrets are very serious ones. One's that seriously need to be addressed if they are true. It's a very powerful poem. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Awe, its sad. My heart dropped for every sorry :( I like it tough, very remorseful, but real

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on December 26, 2010
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