Sage And Saga

Sage And Saga

A Poem by Sami Khalil
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Romance at any mature age and level of wisdom...

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Sage And Saga/By Sami Khalil



Romance at any mature age and level of wisdom...In the mood for the classics



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Declareth I, declareth to thee manifest love
With runnels of gentle sweat running forth
And countenance of our meandering grace
Pouring of honeyed words,proving a worth.

This whip-lashed susurration never abates
Vividly dreams becometh a master witness
The panoply of resilience and florid enigma
Unsoiling the sunsets of life and its fitness.

Declareth I with veneration and delectation
I love thee with truest of perplexed sagacity
Thine beauty filleth mine tremulous heart
By pervading affection, thine own vivacity.

Declareth I whilst surreal skies may conjure
Days ahead when weary would fain treasure.


© 2016 Sami Khalil



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Beautiful and elegant!
Always a treat visiting here.

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Another well crafted piece. It is not everyday that I come across this quality of work.
To be honest, I personally was derailed on a few places, but that did not suspend the flow of delight.
Frankly, my writing isn't any better; I've always been more of a reader.
Thank you

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Wow, Sami! A fantastic write!

I am a big fan of the classic Elizabethan style, and your poem has that in spades.

Excellent vocabulary and very romantic in the tradition of a great Shakespeare sonnet.

Very well done!

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A tremulous heart sounds like a condition I'd gladly endure to be in such a loving and timeless union.
Poetry at it's best Sami.


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Brings us back to the time of romanticism and ode to Shakespeare. Very gentle, dulcet, and loving.

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Loving wisely, one loves everlastingly, isn't that so; of the million shades of love, those that you picked to paint yours in word are of the richest and truest. I admire you style.
"Declareth I with veneration and delectation
I love thee with truest of perplexed sagacity"
Splendid :)

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Dramatic, and lovely -- in the spirit of the classics.
Minor suggestion -- perhaps the first line was copied in a different font accidentally? This program often does that. Also -- provingly worth, perhaps is simply proving worth, or proving worthy?

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Oh my goodness...your language is so lush, and melodic, Sami. Reading it is like basking in its afterglow. Gorgeous...absolutely!

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The panoply of resilience and florid enigma"

Summoning the essence, the poetic portrait that is.
This piece is all word play, in a captivating sense.



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