WHEN I'LL BID ADIEU

WHEN I'LL BID ADIEU

A Poem by Saumya
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feelings of a student about saying goodbye to the school where she had studied for 14 years!!!!!!

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  When one day passes,
The other comes,
Everything changes,
Leaving some,
The 'LOVE', the 'CARE', the 'concern' and
'JOY', that I have received here, was a great fun.

Now has the day come to bid Adieu,
To these wonderful feelings I received.
When I remember, those days so sweet,
When I was a kid of four or five!!
My school taught me, the "ART OF LIFE"..

The way to 'sit', the way to 'stand', the way to
'take', the way to 'understand'
All of this, which were first to me unknown,
My teachers and parents made to me known.

Now, today, after days long back,
When i sit and remember those lovely days,
I can deeply feel the love, care and concern,

Besides those scoldings those days.
I also remember those, swings so sweet,
The lovely flowers, and rhymes so sweet,
like 'TWINKLE-TWINKLE' and 'CHUBBY CHEEKS' .

Time has passed, and I have grown,
No more swings, and no more rhymes,
but its not that, that there's no fun.
When today,I look at the children so cute,
Of three, or four, or five of age:
I can perceive the ART OF LIFE;
It's nothing great, but only this,
"WHEN YOU LIVE, DAY TO DAY;
LIVE TO GIVE, because , the MORE YOU
GIVE, THE MORE YOU LIVE !!!

MY teachers also taught me a wonderful thing;
about success; that,
"DO ANYTHING; but with THE WILL TO WIN".

I hope what i want to say is--
"WHEN YOU LIVE DAY TO DAY ;
Don't live by what people, remark or say;
"BUT, LIVE BY WHAT YOU KNOW IS
TRUE."

Finally to conclude, I'd only say;
"O my lovely school, and wonderful
Teachers,
When I'll adieu ;
I'll really, really, really,
MISS YOU!!!!!!!!

© 2017 Saumya



Author's Note

Saumya
please do comment if you think it was worth reading........i hope you'll love it

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Awww.............. very cute, but it made me sad! I loved this poem! *tear* I think my friend may be feeling the same way. She had to leave our school system because her family had to move, and she mooovvvveeeedddd reeeaaaaaallllllyyyyyy fffffaaaaaarrrr aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyy. But, she'll be going back to our school next year, so YAY! One question... Is the poem about you, or somebody else?

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Nice tribute to your school

Posted 3 Months Ago


Saumya

3 Months Ago

Thank you! 😊
Saumya,
"WHEN I'LL BID ADIEU"
i was taken aback when i realized your schooling was 14 years all in the same school! How nice to be able to build friendships witheveryone there. Here it is different for grade school, Junior High and High School.
I felt the gradual growth of your young life like a well protected and loved garden, growing day by day in your poem.
The goodness and discipline is seen within.
"Sit, stand, take, understand are building and strengthening themes of your young life's learning and meant of carry you into the rest of your life.
Very beautiful.
Thank you for sharing your experience.
Blessings,
Kathy

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

3 Months Ago

Dear Kathy, school has been a treasure for me, and will.always be, since it's been my second home wh.. read more
Kathy Van Kurin

3 Months Ago

It is so encouraging to see some postive, happy thankful feelings for life. Sharing goodness never i.. read more
Saumya

3 Months Ago

Thankyou so much! that means a lot to me Kathy😊 & sure I'll keep up this work!💗

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i never experience this because my schooling were like this
1-4
5-7
8-10
11 & 12
all in different schools and but still i have contacts with my friends who studied with me in 1-4 also. that's really a nostalgia.

After i read your poem i understand how much i miss those days.
thanks for this beautiful piece of ART .

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

4 Months Ago

Nope, not really!
Why you thought so?😊
Abraham George

4 Months Ago

I learnt about the very first alphabet 'a' to what wonders can this mere alphabet can do😊 this pl.. read more
Saumya

4 Months Ago

It's OK 😊
This morning I'm digging back into your archives to find something older that I haven't read yet. This is a precious piece of YOU that shows us the kind, gentle, grateful spirit you possess. So many people do not appreciate the little things in life, or they take for granted many of the basic school lessons, especially the lessons on living, as you've presented here. So many times we just think of the "subjects" we learn in school, like science & math or English and drama. But I like the way you're appreciating the way our school years teach us our first experiences with getting along & meeting new people & working as a team. Always enlightening to read your ponderings! (((HUGS)))

Posted 7 Months Ago


Saumya

7 Months Ago

Wow!😊
Wonderful knowing your story dear friend...You were too young to write at that inno.. read more
barleygirl

7 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words! (((HUGS)))
Saumya

7 Months Ago

You're most welcome 💜
((((Hugs))))
This is a pretty poem. I thought it was worth the read as it made me think of the past in a fond way. You know how nostalgia can be.

-Caradoc

Posted 4 Years Ago


Ohhh.... It is a wonderfull piece of write... It made me remember my school days and those memories of child hood
i read your other poems also.. Others are also good... But this one i liked the most!
may i share this???

Posted 4 Years Ago


Saumya

4 Years Ago

thanx a lot Uzair for your kind words:) glad you liked this piece of mine:)
n yes you can shar.. read more
I wish I'd felt this way about leaving school. This is a fine tribute to your school and its teachers especially - your gratitude is humbling. Well penned Saumya, good luck in your next chapter of life.
X

Posted 4 Years Ago


Saumya

4 Years Ago

thank you soo much Anto:) glad you liked this piece of mine, n many thanks for the wishes:)
Well starting with Author's Note :)
1:) Every poem which is written by anyone is worth - You have added your efforts and made it worth.
2:) I love it initially its very clean and very simple - You made me cry at few instance "Now, today, after days long back, When i sit and remember those lovely days, I can deeply feel the love, care and concern"
These line were amazing - Simple with deeper meaning - Saumya.
3:) Last pointer I'm discussing about CAPS which you used here (Suggestion) You should use some different color.. which will show your feelings :) Just a suggestion.
4:) It will be listed in my favorite now :)
Cheers :)
You made my day with those olden/golden memories which i miss now a day :)
Amazing - Hat's off :)
- Singh :)
100/100 ;)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Saumya

4 Years Ago

thank you soo much Vikrant:) very glad you liked this work of mine n much glad that you could relate.. read more
made me remember my school days..... good one...

Posted 4 Years Ago


it was definitely worth reading and brought back memories of my high school days. Nicely done.

Posted 4 Years Ago



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