A Poem by Simple_mee

My mind is confused. I've to make a decision regarding my career but everything is just muddled...






I search the boulevard

Strain my eyes for a beam of light

A sign, an indication or a point

My heart is lost in an unknown land

Thoughts enter my mind but senseless emerge

I watch the birds fly south every year

Watch the seasons make the trees naked then green

The sun sets and rises to a new dawn

The cycles obey the nature without a grumble

But I fail to follow the course my life is taking

What is happening?

Where am I headed?

Questions are many but answers none

Days are long but numbered short

Life is the same & I am just a ROAMER !!



© 2010 Simple_mee

Author's Note

No rhyme scheme...just a cluster of thoughts running in my mind... !!

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Now you didn't follow a rhyme scheme but it read well as a poem. Good work. :)
The last line is the best.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Sometimes the best poems are the ones which lack rhyme scheme!
I love how you poured your personal life into this one and how you used your writing as an outlet in your time of turmoil. I can feel your emotions in these lines..........
Great work and good luck!!

Posted 8 Years Ago

I very much enjoyed this because there is your own personal truth in this poem. The description of your environment is what I found most rewarding about this piece. Very good way of expressing yourself through and through.
BTW: Concerning your situation; take the time to figure out where you want to be in life and give it all the thought it needs to reconnect with your soul.

Posted 8 Years Ago

this poem really does include deep thought. i liked your idea and articulation. gud work :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

I really enjoyed reading this. there was acceptance is being lost. a calm, odd happiness in being lost. this one was unique, so thank you.

Posted 8 Years Ago

It is easy to lose our way in a life. I like the feel of this poem. Sometime we must stop and figure where we want to be. A excellent poem. Description and story in your words were outstanding.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Your words do seem to dance across the seasons and the waywardness of our hearts and minds. The questions posed cause one to stop and wonder, which I think is most often a good thing! Excellent write!

Posted 8 Years Ago

I really enjoyed this write.
Alot of thought in this write.

Posted 8 Years Ago

"Questions are many but answers none
Days are long but numbered short"

ditto my sentiments.. !! good write !! :) and flow is good.. no need for a rhyme scheme

Posted 8 Years Ago

man this is one hell of a poem. the only thing i think should be changed is "I'm just a roamer" but other than that this is brilliant

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on April 9, 2010
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