KillerClown!!!

Idea by: Angela Cookie Monster Auten :)

My laughing so bitter,

The same goes for her glitter,

Adding the sprinkles to the flesh of her liver,

 

The trailer trash home,

My area zoned,

I look for the weak, the children alone,

 

Luring my smile,

The painted denial,

My colorful cover misleading the child,

 

Now leaving this town,

In pain and unsound,

On to the next comes this carniverous clown..

Reviews

[Liz-z]

1. I hate clowns for this reason
2. clowns freak me out for this reason
3. it's an excellent poem because it made me picture a killer clown... -shivers-
4. Did I mention I fear clowns?
lol
What a creepy little poem, so very moving too. I love it! I actually loved it! Going on to my favorites! The perfect horror movie. XD
Favorite lines:
"I look for the weak, the children alone"
Wow, just wow, creepy yet excellent line!
"On to the next comes this carnivorous clown."
Perfect ending... really freaked me out!

[HorrorMaster]

Awesome poem

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That was creepy..sinister...that left me smiling uncomfortably.. like someone is behind but you think your being silly then BAM!!!!

My daughter has a proper clown phobia...she would simply die if she saw that picture!!

[Robin]

you have painted a picture with dark social undertones, this sounds like it could be the start of a Steven King type of novel , we all know how we look at St. Bernard's and and Old Chryslers after he got a hold them ...

Well done.

[Marlena]

>.< I HATE clowns. I'm not as scared of them as I used to be, but they're creepy xD Good poem, but I think you should expand a little more.

[Franklin...]

Interesting rhyme scheme, good flow of words. And now I have one more reason to be leery of clowns. Nice job.

[Dave M. Pitman]

freaky! but a great write.

[Numb]

Oh I loved that! :D It was excellent!
I loved the imagery, I could see every little detail inside my head. Normally, when I try to rhyme, it comes out forced, but yours flow perfectly ^^

Favorite lines would have to be...

"Now leaving this town,
In pain and unsound,
On to the next comes this carniverous clown.."

Excellent, truly was :D

~N~

[Onyx_Rayne]

Excellent and super creepy! I can't stand clowns..those nose and feet are just too big and that makeup..well, you've seen them...

As for the write, it is awesome... the imagery , the flow..all of it.

"Luring my smile,
The painted denial
My colorful cover mislleading the child,"

That gave me the shivers!

As usual, FANTASTIC write :)

[Revolved]

That's how I picture all of the clowns in the world.... BRAVO! Loving the rhymes the most! You wrote them so cleverly. :D