I Will Tell Her Tomorrow

Just words.

My heart is tired of waiting anymore,

I can’t hold unto this any longer,

I will not be afraid anymore,

I won’t listen to the demons inside me.

 

How can I keep this love for long?

How can I pretend it is okay?

When inside I am decaying,

No, I must tell her tomorrow.

 

I will tell her I adore her,

I will adorn her with words of life,

I will pour all jewels in my heart to her,

Because I am tired of pretending.

 

If she says no, I will return again,

Because I can’t love another,

I can’t cherish another,

My heart is for her alone

CopyRight 2017, Boygene Borice

Author's Note

Don't wait,if you love someone, speak it out :)

Reviews

[Carla]

Beautiful. Very beautiful

[Zoya]

Haha, why not today? If one says this at 11:59pm I can quite understand. One day can cost you much.
Lame jokes aside, this was a heartfelt piece. Sure one should confess their love towards someone without much procrastination. Nice work!

[boygene borice]

That's true... time is unpredictable but also making that move sometimes becomes doubtful

[Zoya]

I understand

[APOORVA]

such love :)
such beauty of sentiments
you're right, if you love someone say it..

How can I keep this love for long?
How can I pretend it is okay?
When inside I am decaying,
No, I must tell her tomorrow.
MY FAVORITE LINES

[boygene borice]

Thank you for your review :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Wow! I agree with every line of this poem. Don't waste any time to say what you feel because tomorrow might be late to do it...
Thanks for sharing.

[boygene borice]

Thank you so much for your kind words :)

[Ellen Kolman]

Heart felt and passionate poem...it is a blessed woman indeed to be loved this deeply...expressed exquisitely...you have a gift my sweet friend...BRAVO

[boygene borice]

Thank you for your kind words. Pleasure :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and demanding words. Some woman make us wild and crazy. We need only them. I like the strength of the words and the ending. Thank you my friend for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[boygene borice]

Very true my firend. Sometimes they carry us away in a world unknown. Thank you for your visit :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Paul]

So well written! I enjoyed reading this. As I'm sure I will again. Thanks for sharing this!

[boygene borice]

Thank you so much, for loving my poem :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Wow. Beautifully written. You have expressed your views very well I could feel it.

[boygene borice]

Thank you, for your kind words :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome

[Hebe]

Wonderful write... I could feel the anxiety through your words:
I will pour all jewels in my heart to her,
Because I am tired of pretending.
....sometimes you just have to roll the dice!

[boygene borice]

Very true. Words unspoken hurt much more than words said. Thank you for your review :)