Tidal Brush

Tidal Brush

A Poem by Precious Seconds

The morning night as waves form
I stare right into you

Crimson weight 

As we brush across 
Like the most gentle tide

Subtle sun

Seated in perfect position
Our clocks have aligned

Warm shores

A sigh traveled through a shield
You held your composure

Luring gaze

Driving me to your safety
Rebellious is my nature

Crisp white

For you are nurture

As i held my breathing heart
Your eyes pierce so many shades

Serene lock

From cascading blue 
To the eager red within

Bristle blow

It dawned on me
In moments positioned

Tender melt

You are the future
Touching my hands

Hues of light

Pulling me to safety
I side tracked to listen

Render 

As my thoughts float on your boat

Opal ode

I may have detoured
But you stole my soul

Tidal gentle whisper
Telling me there is no rear view mirror

Only you
Holding us together



© 2016 Precious Seconds



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Beautifully told a love that moves the heart and soul. Lovely write.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Precious Seconds

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much
that slight brush of a turn of a tide, finding that someone who will float our boat...and give us a safe boat on which to sail our love...

a love that holds the other and both together...no need for life jackets...

there is safety for the heart.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Precious Seconds

11 Months Ago

Oh yes
thanks for always understanding me
i love how described the changes in life and love so vividly over 2 poems the imagery really enthralled me these poem tell a entire lifetime of change in so few words great job serendipity ! (:

Posted 11 Months Ago


Precious Seconds

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much
TheAimlessWanderer

11 Months Ago

your welcome (:
Wow. So intense and beautiful. I really enjoyed this.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Precious Seconds

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much
This is a fine piece of work. Nicely constructed and well written. Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 11 Months Ago


Precious Seconds

11 Months Ago

Thank you for your support
oh how i am in love with love ...so much to inspire ...colors, feelings, senses of touch by hands and sea breezes .. "Opal ode" what a treasure!! ahhhhhh heavy cleansing sigh ;)
E.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Precious Seconds

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much E
Serendipity, I really like how you wove what appears to be two poems together to make a beautiful piece about love. Good write

Posted 11 Months Ago


Precious Seconds

11 Months Ago

Thanks Ted !!
This piece goes so well with the photograph. The beauty, the danger, the path it takes us on and our connections held in place, no matter what is thrown our way.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Precious Seconds

11 Months Ago

Thank you Nemo
Lorry.

11 Months Ago

You're wecome
I find this to be a tale of faith... whether it be with yourself, a loved one or God. Anyway you look at it this is quite inspiring.

The only time we should look back is to see how far we have come.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Precious Seconds

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much !!!

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