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Tidal Brush

Tidal Brush

A Poem by Precious Seconds

The morning night as waves form
I stare right into you

Crimson weight 

As we brush across 
Like the most gentle tide

Subtle sun

Seated in perfect position
Our clocks have aligned

Warm shores

A sigh traveled through a shield
You held your composure

Luring gaze

Driving me to your safety
Rebellious is my nature

Crisp white

For you are nurture

As i held my breathing heart
Your eyes pierce so many shades

Serene lock

From cascading blue 
To the eager red within

Bristle blow

It dawned on me
In moments positioned

Tender melt

You are the future
Touching my hands

Hues of light

Pulling me to safety
I side tracked to listen

Render 

As my thoughts float on your boat

Opal ode

I may have detoured
But you stole my soul

Tidal gentle whisper
Telling me there is no rear view mirror

Only you
Holding us together



© 2016 Precious Seconds



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'Tidal Brush'
Precious Seconds,
This reminded me of the way the waves catch the sun and colors change as they undulate through there own depths of ocean beauty. But in all this love is the color and the light. It felt like that to me. Really beautiful the way you share a double meaning and description with the one, two and three word captions of simple description for each stanza. Unique and refreshing poem!
Blessings,
Kathy

Posted 4 Days Ago


Descriptive is beautiful in this poem I wish i could write like this

Posted 3 Months Ago


Lingering Soul

3 Months Ago

I am sure you can. Thank you
Beautifully told a love that moves the heart and soul. Lovely write.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Precious Seconds

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much
that slight brush of a turn of a tide, finding that someone who will float our boat...and give us a safe boat on which to sail our love...

a love that holds the other and both together...no need for life jackets...

there is safety for the heart.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Precious Seconds

1 Year Ago

Oh yes
thanks for always understanding me
i love how described the changes in life and love so vividly over 2 poems the imagery really enthralled me these poem tell a entire lifetime of change in so few words great job serendipity ! (:

Posted 1 Year Ago


Precious Seconds

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much
TheAimlessWanderer

1 Year Ago

your welcome (:
Wow. So intense and beautiful. I really enjoyed this.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Precious Seconds

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much
This is a fine piece of work. Nicely constructed and well written. Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Precious Seconds

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your support
oh how i am in love with love ...so much to inspire ...colors, feelings, senses of touch by hands and sea breezes .. "Opal ode" what a treasure!! ahhhhhh heavy cleansing sigh ;)
E.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Precious Seconds

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much E
Serendipity, I really like how you wove what appears to be two poems together to make a beautiful piece about love. Good write

Posted 1 Year Ago


Precious Seconds

1 Year Ago

Thanks Ted !!
This piece goes so well with the photograph. The beauty, the danger, the path it takes us on and our connections held in place, no matter what is thrown our way.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Precious Seconds

1 Year Ago

Thank you Nemo
Lorry

1 Year Ago

You're wecome

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