Rehearsal

I know why the morning air dares to dance with Dandelions, 

Horizons, and Sunflowers.

The gravity of graceful stares, etched in clock hours.

Time and towering Sparrows,

Native arrows of talons through space;

As if Maya Angelou would personally tell the solar wind why the caged bird sings.

A line between ivory and a black leaf,

Gleaming particles from the sun come crashing into the magnetosphere.

Producing dancing auroras in the night sky.

A poetic rehearsal,

A performance to repeat.

In the morning.

Reviews

[emipoemi]

...I cannot particularly put into words the sublimity and mystic aura that this poems conveys into the atmosphere! This awesome! In assonance, musicality, imagery! You got it down! It flows with a lulling lilt that really makes the readers feel, and that image to go along with it is simply perfect (and divine)! Well done!

[Ty]

Your review is absolutely amazing, conveying emotions evoked in you. So many thanks!

[emipoemi]

my pleasure.

[KWP]

this is a lovely piece of work
I like the introduction of Maya Angelou
I like the repeat button and life of course goes on ;) very nice X

[Ty]

Something I'd hope would resonate with many. Thanks so much!

[zaisham9393]

"Gleaming particles from the sun come crashing into the magnetosphere.

Producing dancing auroras in the night sky.''

These lines from this poem are beautiful! Thank you for sharring it with me :)!

[Ty]

I'd hoped to instill words of a more lighthearted root. Glad those lines caught your attention! Many thanks!

[H L Rose]

I like your descriptions. Each line feels inspirational, like I could derive an entire scene from even a single one.

“Native arrows of talons through space” sounds especially unique to me.

I enjoyed being pulled into this intriguing picture!

[Ty]

Too kind! Can't thank you enough. I'm always in hopes the photos will shed additional light in some way.

[H L Rose]

Of course! The photo definitly connects well with the poem and it’s great that the imagery in the poem is enough to conjour a picture even without the photo.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Nature's proformanes are always new, never exacting. You have created a fresh look at morning

[Ty]

Thanks so much Cherrie!

[Najam Us Saher]

You have created a wonderful image. I loved to know why the morning air dances with the dandelions. ☺

[Ty]

The morning also dances with you, Najam. So many thanks!

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.