Writing Reality

As I open my mouth with the hopes to create beauty,

Images fill my mind and words cross by my eyes.

My lips move in what I image to be a graceful manner,

But what dribbles out is nothing but vomit.

The link between mind and articulation clearly broken.

Motor functions failing to annunciate correctly,

What starts as a magnificent thought,

A wondrous attempt at developing passion,

Turns into a slap from reality;

A reminder that my “talents” are better left to my own imagination.

Author's Note

I had the biggest urge to write and suddenly I didn't know what to put together. So this is what happened.

Reviews

[abderrahmane dakir]

Your poem is wonderful, I like it so much. Thank you so mush for sharing.

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Wow!
Very well written and it touched me,
Can I just say though, you have potential!
My favorite part was, "As I open my mouth with the hopes to create beauty,
Images fill my mind and words cross by my eyes.
My lips move in what I image to be a graceful manner,
But what dribbles out is nothing but vomit."
Please continue to write and read!
Can you by chance look at my story The Blonde Girl, It would really mean a lot to me.
Your new fan,

C. Lee Battaglia

[hanir]

This happens to me..all the time! Lol.
But I should say you were articulate in writing this piece.
Keep writing. 😊

[terry smith]

That's how I am with drawing, but I keep at it till it is at least o.k.to me.

[james miles]

yes...beautiful...well said!

[Sami Khalil]

Your writing capabilities are immense. Pen on...:).......

[The Twin Arenas]

practice makes perfect. pollock splattered paint. Any writing is writing.

[Misery]

One day in the life of a writer. Tomorrow...you will create beauty.