Seasons

It's unfinished

In Fall

Dreading all

Sick feeling

Head reeling

Winter's here

Imediat fear

More pain 

No gain

Empty cup

Giving up

No reasons

Changing seasons

Spring's around

New sounds

Another day

Feeling okay

Lifted fear

Happiness near

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I have never read such a good short poem before there's so many reasons why this was such a great poem.
This was filled with sadness and dreed at the start it was very dark, then at the end it got light and it was as if to say there is a light at the end of the darkness.
It seems as though you hate winter just as much as me by the sounds of this poem. Isn't it awful.
Not only was this about all kinds of happy and sad emotions, it was also about seasons. It was so short yet about so much, That is very impressive how you fit so much meaning into such a small write.
I loved the rhymes they where flawless.
Amazing poem really liked it. Great job :)

[His]

thanks and yeah i hate winter everythings cold and dark and dead it's terrible

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Yer so do i lol.
Your welcome :)

[Lord of mad men]

A very wonderful piece. Is speaks 9f tge different chages one may go through. It tells of the good and the bad. All people crave happiness but there are those who refuse happness for a reason much greater to them then their happness. This is very nicely done. I enjoyed every word. Keep on writing. Yours truely a mad lord

[His]

Thank you .

[Jerryyoung1z]

A brilliant piece; making use of short sentences to tell a tale of change and it's effect both good and bad to the character here. I believe that with the dawn of every new day, we move a step closer, an inch nearer to our desired happiness until finally, the day comes. I think the seasons here represent the different stages or phase of a human life; a season of dryness, and season of reduction a d set back, a season rain and abundance and so on.

[His]

Thanks Jerrs