Island Girl Beach Walk

On the Beach with my Island Girl

Island Girl Beach Walk

We walked along

the water's edge,

as waves

cascaded down

upon the sand.

Holding hands

in the late

afternoon sun,

walking barefoot

with sand

in between our toes.

Dressed in island

wear

with me in shorts

and her

a long sarong

of floral design.

She pulled me

away from

the water edge.

Up to the site of

the mango grove.

Slipping into

the shadow of the

Mango trees,

my Island Girl

pulled me close.

With her sarong

now free

she embraces me.

And we lie down

under her sarong.

In the grove of Mango trees.

Author's Note

Continuing this until it turns to crap, which I am sure someone will alert me.

Reviews

[AaronFreitas]

This is awesome and perfectly descriptive Willard. I enjoyed it and I think I was a little envious of this lucky character haha :) Good work buddy... definitely not crap my friend :)

[Willard Wells]

The 4 of Island Girl may be at an end. If I had planned it I could have gone longer and maybe something will come to me, but at the moment in is the end of the series. I hope for more. Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for stopping by.

[R Smith]

no way is this crap Will, a sensuous stroll along the beach with a beautiful girl sharing love, great stuff :)

[Willard Wells]

Thank you Richard. I appreciate the time spent with my words and comments.

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a tantalizing story in poetic form, leaving the reader wanting more...lovely, Willard

[Willard Wells]

I am glad you approve. It has been a fun series, but not sure if there is more. Better planning would have given me more or the Island Girl, but not sure there's much left beyond the three. Thank you for taking time to read and comment on my work.

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always, my friend..

[E G TEN]

Hahaha. This is awesome Mr. Wells
And we lie down under her "Sarong".
Don't worry about it being crappy, remember
Crap makes good fertilizer :-)
Thanks for sharing..

[Willard Wells]

Thanks EG. This is a new idea that seems to have a life of it's own and it's fun. Thanks for stopping by and commenting.

[E G TEN]

No problem Will anytime, if I can. Thanks.