Forevermore

Your heart beckons me to another time and place, 

A reminder of romance, of love, and a tender embrace. 

And I, captured like a moth to a flame, am paralyzed by your Light. 

Enraptured in your essence, I give up without a fight. 

I gaze lovingly upon your reflection and see, 

The very intimate and beautiful parts of me. 

To which my heart dances with yours forevermore, 

So shall we dance ’til the early light of a days new morn.

Reviews

[Mr.Writer]

Woah! Did I also name my poem forevermore? Hmmm... yes I did! :D
Very good poem Anastasia! A short and sweet poem, very sweet poem of yours!
"I gaze lovingly upon your reflection and see,
The very intimate and beautiful parts of me. "
These are the best lines ever! Wow, so creative! Keep it up Anastasia! :)

[Stacy Purvis]

Yes, we both have poems with the same title, but different. I enjoy and love them both. 😊

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you! I really loved your poem, tbh, it was a bit better and well worded than mine :) I also love both

[Stacy Purvis]

If you say so. I feel as though they are equally pleasing. xxx

[Mr.Writer]

Your work and many others works inspire me to write more :)

[Stacy Purvis]

Likewise! There is much passion and beauty to behold through another's eyes....

[Mr.Writer]

True that :)

[Warrior]

breath taking

simply breath taking

[Najam Us Saher]

Flow and rhythm of this poem are good. I liked it.

[andrew mitchell]

the title says it all to dream of love forevermore. nice work.

[Joey Nizz]

Lovely message, reading this made me smile
Thank you for sharing.

[Surya]

shall we dance, haha, just kidding , That's cute lovely as well..:)

[Sammie Sanchez]

nicely done rhymining-(can't spell lol XD) anyways, your emotion were presented nicely. all in all nice piece

[wordman]

my heart dances with yours for ever more says it all,
either for real or in a memory