7. Reverie II (English)

7. Reverie II (English)

A Chapter by Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)
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For a translation to English

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Kissing petals from the rose I planted

I swallow a cloud to conceal my dreams

inside, fireworks when I see you

Stars take the place of tears in my eyes


I sink in a mirror, trapped with just your reflection

Oh, beautiful ghost who's name I know not

My spirit rejoices, smiling at an empty crown

A ring painted, bronze, silver, and gold


I find myself on my knees at dark

Sailing through a realm of beauty and light

I felt you in the wind tickling my face

and the rush of waves hugging me tight


I noticed in the flames a body revealed

Ashes that leave behind a trace

The Snow are words I cannot decode

Falling from heavens rivers to pour on me


In my hand I hold a spirit, a light

The one reason of my fight

It's yours and I keep it as your life

For you are, yes you, My Spiritual Wife






© 2017 Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)



Author's Note

Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)
English Version

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This reads like a love letter. And very nice.
Why would anyone want to conceal their dreams? And swallowing a cloud? Interesting...
The last stanza here is just perfect ending..

Posted 6 Months Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)

6 Months Ago

oh thank you very much
Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

You're welcome 😊
This is beautiful. I really love how you did a Spanish version and an English one! That is really unique. Very beautiful and delicate but powerful showing your emotion.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)

7 Months Ago

Well, thank you very much for stopping by, I shall take a look at your writing as well :)
i like it, it flowed nicely as well as it should. good work

Posted 7 Months Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)

7 Months Ago

Thank you little miss sam
Very beautifully woven. Each stanza is a tangible, lovely energy. Poetically charged in the right ways, lovely :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)

7 Months Ago

Thank you kindly dear
Very beautiful poem. Enjoyed reading. :) good job :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much
Lauren_The_Awesome

8 Months Ago

Youre welcome
Each line of your poem just shined. I don't have words for the poem. I loved it. Each line was hunting. Thank you very much for sharing!!!

Posted 8 Months Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)

8 Months Ago

Thank you kindly
I just melted. Your words were beautiful, sentimental. The flow was perfect.. amazing

Posted 8 Months Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)

8 Months Ago

Oh my, thank you dear, melting like candle wax I hope. :) xx
Eternal Escape

8 Months Ago

Lol I actually meant my icy heart lol, but look how smooth you are XD
Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)

8 Months Ago

Hey, where there is opportunity, I take it. Not a snake, but surely sly, well... It all depends ;)
This is simply beautiful, and I'm really not a big poetry fan. From beginning to end, it's a lovely string of words that captivate. Great work :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)

8 Months Ago

Thank you very much for the beautiful review
Omg this is absolutely beautiful! I've been waiting for the English version. So smooth and wow. I don't really know what else to say expect I love it, beautiful job on this one. Easily one of my favorites :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)

8 Months Ago

Thank you thank you so much for the very kind words

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Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)

Worcester, MA



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