7. Reverie II (English)

For a translation to English

Kissing petals from the rose I planted

I swallow a cloud to conceal my dreams

inside, fireworks when I see you

Stars take the place of tears in my eyes

I sink in a mirror, trapped with just your reflection

Oh, beautiful ghost who's name I know not

My spirit rejoices, smiling at an empty crown

A ring painted, bronze, silver, and gold

I find myself on my knees at dark

Sailing through a realm of beauty and light

I felt you in the wind tickling my face

and the rush of waves hugging me tight

I noticed in the flames a body revealed

Ashes that leave behind a trace

The Snow are words I cannot decode

Falling from heavens rivers to pour on me

In my hand I hold a spirit, a light

The one reason of my fight

It's yours and I keep it as your life

For you are, yes you, My Spiritual Wife

Author's Note

English Version

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

This reads like a love letter. And very nice.
Why would anyone want to conceal their dreams? And swallowing a cloud? Interesting...
The last stanza here is just perfect ending..

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

oh thank you very much

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome 😊

[Courtney Hough]

This is beautiful. I really love how you did a Spanish version and an English one! That is really unique. Very beautiful and delicate but powerful showing your emotion.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Well, thank you very much for stopping by, I shall take a look at your writing as well :)

[Sammie Sanchez]

i like it, it flowed nicely as well as it should. good work

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Thank you little miss sam

[Ruth]

Very beautifully woven. Each stanza is a tangible, lovely energy. Poetically charged in the right ways, lovely :)

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Thank you kindly dear

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Very beautiful poem. Enjoyed reading. :) good job :)

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Thank you so much

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Youre welcome

[Shasha]

Each line of your poem just shined. I don't have words for the poem. I loved it. Each line was hunting. Thank you very much for sharing!!!

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Thank you kindly

[J.A. Blackwell]

I just melted. Your words were beautiful, sentimental. The flow was perfect.. amazing

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Oh my, thank you dear, melting like candle wax I hope. :) xx

[J.A. Blackwell]

Lol I actually meant my icy heart lol, but look how smooth you are XD

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Hey, where there is opportunity, I take it. Not a snake, but surely sly, well... It all depends ;)

[Eli Castor]

This is simply beautiful, and I'm really not a big poetry fan. From beginning to end, it's a lovely string of words that captivate. Great work :)

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Thank you very much for the beautiful review

[Giulia King]

Omg this is absolutely beautiful! I've been waiting for the English version. So smooth and wow. I don't really know what else to say expect I love it, beautiful job on this one. Easily one of my favorites :)

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Thank you thank you so much for the very kind words