Thy Lips

Thy Lips

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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In collaboration with Michael G. Smith.

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Thy lips,

    Wet roses; milk pink.

Pillows, silks and sighs...

    sounds of a river’s dance,

soft as quiver’s cry

 

Thy lips,

    Red velvet glaz'd frosting;

nude blood moons lipstick sky,

    strawberry fields forever and ever;

scarlet pills upon this tongue of mine.


Thy lips,

    Surrender caresses; gently imparts, 

carries my heart to flutter haze.

   Gives way to dreams of delight;

time halts as thy face, I touch an' graze.


Thy lips,

    Tiffany’s priceless on display.

Greater mold’s God hath cast;

    visions to a future day,

of gems trap'd in an hourglass.

 

Thy lips,

    a kiss traverse through blush mist;

finding its way to a lover shy.

    Awaiting thy touch to soothe my heart;

like dew in morning's tinge light.


Thy lips,

    burgundy botl'd time;

messages read in fuzzy sips.

    Tickling tastes of champagne.

Monet’s masterpieces palettes.

 

Thy lips, 

    sweet honey, floral nectar,

tastes of the spring lingers in silence din.

    Blossoming flowers speak an' sway;

divine beauty capturing hearts within.


Thy lips,

    Red ribbons wrapp'd ornate;

unwrapp'd petals in austral wind.

   Oracles gauging unknown's fate,

kisses final touch serenity’s grandeur gift.




© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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Featured Review

Such a marvelously gorgeous piece in all ways, Yumna and Michael.
A cowrite by two wondrously accomplished artists, no less, in a sensually romantic mood that sweeps tenderly and sweetly through the emotions of my heart.
The picture, presentation, and poetic enthrallment truly make this a virtual masterpiece of sheer allure to the senses … ummm, my own lips can almost taste the moment.

What's not to love … kudos, you two! ⁓ Richard : )

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

4 Months Ago

Ahh, I'm glad you like this collaborative effort, Richard. Thank you so much. Your words mean a lot .. read more
Richard

4 Months Ago

As do yours to me … you are quite welcome, Yumna!



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Beautiful glimpses, stroke by stroke, and sigh by sigh. There is something wholly sacred about lips, the pathway of words of love and praise, and the softness of kisses, tender and sweet. Each collaborated color is blended here in pure wonder.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

There probably is, as the men like to delve deeper into the various, erm beauties of the opposite se.. read more
An owl on the moon

6 Months Ago

The words really feel like a song playing over a summer night, and yes, so beautiful. 😊
Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

You're always so kind. Thank you truly 😊😊😊
I love the picture! I can see this poem as the thoughts of the artist as he renders the image of his lover. Good choice. Thank you again for collaborating with me.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Well I'm glad you like the pic too 😊
Thank you too for letting me. It was a nice experien.. read more
Gorgeous, simply gorgeous writing! You've taken my breath away - truly!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Well I am proud to have worked with him and of course for all the appreciation. Thank you for the ni.. read more
Michael G. Smith

6 Months Ago

Awww shucks, thank you. YumnaKay my fave line is "finding its way to a lover shy" it has a great rhy.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Hmm mine is whole first stanza. It has got a nice touch 😊
So vivid and sweet ... I enjoyed : )
My favorite aspect of this piece had to be the euphonic sounds and melodious flow within each stanza. I noticed you used the soft "l," "r," and "s" sounds a lot, which I think really helped to convey the romantic feel of the poem. I must ask, was this intentional,or did this poem just come out like that?

Thank you for sharing.

- William Liston

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michael G. Smith

6 Months Ago

Please explain further but I'm sure it wasn't intentional because I just asked myself and the reply .. read more
William Liston

6 Months Ago

Hello Michael (I assume your comment was meant for me)
In my review, I was referring to how m.. read more
Michael G. Smith

6 Months Ago

It was't intentionally. What I wa trying to achieve was describing lips comparative to art where ev.. read more
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BBP
This was so perfectly painted .. Soft and beautifully penned.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you, Bev! I'm glad you like it.
Michael really made me scratch my head what are lips l.. read more
Michael G. Smith

6 Months Ago

Lol. So the truth is I got the idea from the show "Friends". It's true. Theres an episode were Monic.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Hahaha I didn't watch that show or I would have come up with something earlier 😉😂
nice work, love this, fantastic imagery - :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you, KTBradley. I appreciate your words 😊
This is magnificent poetry guys. Eloquent and serene and pure magic. Bravo x 2
:))

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

So this definitely is 'safe' by your standards? 😂😂 lol I'm kidding
Thank you Tony! I'm .. read more
This is such a beautiful & elegant piece, written by 2 of my favorite poets also. Nicely written my dear friend :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Kesha! Glad you like it 😊😊
Kesha

6 Months Ago

You are very welcome :)
Thy lips are really interesting. This blossomed so beautifully. When shall we write? This is stupendous. Such elegance

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mr.Writer

6 Months Ago

Lol, I will, I have an eye on all of you ;)
BEWARE
Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Hahahahaha yeah I have noticed that 😉 you seem like me in this aspect lol 😂
Mr.Writer

6 Months Ago

Lol :D Yupp

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