Bonomec

I'm in the Navy, and loving it. I write stories with anthro characters. My rating is teen because of swear words, drinking and smoking, and alluding to sex(if you feel like I need to change it to mature let me know).
If you have any ideas on how my writing can be improved please let me know! Even if you rip it apart and say it's s**t I'll be happy as long as you can offer tips on how to improve. Hope you enjoy and have a great day!