Mandi D K

Mandi D K

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http://dreamingfullyawake.com
Melbourne, Australia
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About Me

I'm a 25 year old writing lover living in the beautiful city of Melbourne. Currently I'm undertaking my second degree and in my last year of the amazing course. I love running, healthy foods, D&M's and meeting new people. I'm shy at first but once you strip away that mask you'll find someone who is fun loving and easy to talk to.


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Posted 11 Years Ago


Thank you! I've been wanting to get some feedback on it for a while, but noone had done anything!

Sorry about the semi-colons instead of general speech marks - I've been reading a lot into James Joyce's 'Ulysses' recently, and that threw all chances of a straightforward writing style straight out of the window! Nonetheless, aside from the original shock of finding something bizarre to look at, do you expect that the shorthand (; as speech, and // as computer visuals, etc.) will be easily understandable for future stories? Or would you rather recommend a more ordinary style?

I look forward to reading your 'Love Hurts.' I had a brief skim and it looks quite interesting!

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Posted 11 Years Ago


lol now i am :D

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Posted 11 Years Ago


You too - Your'e wellcome - maybe I sensed that ;-)
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Posted 11 Years Ago


Hi Kali - thank you very much for your review :) and friendship, and I am happy to tell you that there will be a chapter II :)

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Posted 11 Years Ago


hi! Thank you for FR and for the review from my first posted piece.

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Posted 11 Years Ago


lol wooo!! I'm sure WritersCafe appreciates(sp?) your addictiveness to it :P

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Posted 11 Years Ago


You rock more Mandi!!!! haha