Poor Little Rag Doll

This is interesting prose work for poetry. I think this would make a remarkable series. The doll, entering into the living, to tell the horrid tale, of all that she had seen. Quite impressive.. Very origional and very very intriquiging, You should make this poem a preface, and re-order it as a book. Each chapter can be in poetic form telling this sad tale from begining to end.. Wonderful creation. 100/100 for the idea alon, and a 100/100 for the technical its really a 200/100 in my oppinion, but they won't let me go higher than 100. Let me know if you pursue this as a book of prose poetry so I can add it to my reading list. Thank you

Posted 13 Years Ago

It's a great narrative... but don't give the secret away too soon... i think there's a lot of scope here for a series of poems that just give away a little bit more each time... each one pared down to the barest suggestions of what the doll has 'seen' and 'experienced'.

Posted 13 Years Ago

This is interesting prose work for poetry. I think this would make a remarkable series. The doll, entering into the living, to tell the horrid tale, of all that she had seen. Quite impressive.. Very origional and very very intriquiging, You should make this poem a preface, and re-order it as a book. Each chapter can be in poetic form telling this sad tale from begining to end.. Wonderful creation. 100/100 for the idea alon, and a 100/100 for the technical its really a 200/100 in my oppinion, but they won't let me go higher than 100. Let me know if you pursue this as a book of prose poetry so I can add it to my reading list. Thank you

Posted 13 Years Ago