I don't know what to tell you

I don't know what to tell you

A Poem by Olivia Danielle

I don’t know what to tell you

I could start with day one

When I saw your golden locks

And your deep blue eyes

Hair like the sand

Eyes like the ocean

Or perhaps I could start with our fondest memories

But you know all of this

What is something I could tell you that would make you feel how I do

Make you understand the paintings on your skin when the light hits it

There no exact words

Just the feeling when you glance at me

Then look back down

So shy

So sweet

With all that said

I never told you what I truly want to say

And that is because

I don’t know what to tell you

That could make you feel

As special as you are

© 2018 Olivia Danielle

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Hello Olivia:) a very sincere expression in your lines seems you did a good job of saying what to say without saying what you said

Posted 7 Months Ago

Olivia Danielle

7 Months Ago

Thank you very much Robert, I enjoyed reading your review!
morning, thanks for this beautiful poem entry into my competition, lovely, good luck

Posted 10 Months Ago

This reads much like a letter. It is sincere to its very core. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago

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Added on November 12, 2018
Last Updated on November 12, 2018

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