Take Me ~

Take Me ~

A Poem by Susan


Take Me!


Strong hands

softly caress along ...

surround in wanting embrace,

oh-MY!


Commands,

whisp'ring sighs ~ sweet love's song;

'pon every garment ... unlace;

let fly!


Our plans’

hot passions naught prolong.

Quick! Close the door,  just in case …

outcry!

© 2019 Susan


Author's Note

Susan
STEPLADDER
an original poetic form created by:
Robert "Bad Bunny" Trakofler ©2019

A brilliant form, worthy of the most skilled writer’s efforts,
Stepladder is composed of 3 Quatrain verses minimum.
Line counts are: 2/6/7/2, 2/6/7/2, 2/6/7/2, etc.
Rhyme scheme is: a,b,c,d a,b,c,d a,b,c,d

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This is lovely.
I could feel the melody in my head, stuck on replay as I read the poem over and over again.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Susan

1 Month Ago

:-) Thank you for the sweet review!
Kay Salisu Titilola

1 Month Ago

My pleasure...
WOW!! This is so very good and I enjoyed the form. Nicely done

Posted 2 Months Ago


Susan

1 Month Ago

Thank you for taking the time to read and review!! :-)
Nice poem... I got the message from you

Posted 2 Months Ago


Susan

1 Month Ago

:-) Thank you for taking the time to read and review!
Listen here young lady, you have to stop all this writing about passion and love and noises, and other stuff. It's not good for old folks like myself. It's bad on our hearts. At my age I can only dream of such things. I'll probably die in my sleep. I think my heart stopped the other night.
On the serious side, Bad Bunny is pretty cool, and you used it well.
Your words stirred the pot of passion.
A wonderful write.
Well, now it's off to see the cardiologist.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Susan

3 Months Ago

First off, you get a smile for calling me a 'young lady" :-))) As far as too old?? Nawwww, and drea.. read more
Susan

3 Months Ago

.... Thank you for taking the time to read and review! I do appreciate it.
anxiously we wait for passion and love to take charge of our heart body and soul! Love takes charge! Your words takes your readers there Short, sweet direct. Full of passion.

Posted 3 Months Ago


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Rye
This is such a wonderful beautiful write. Very lovely

Posted 3 Months Ago


Beautiful artwork and amazing words. You made the reader believe the thoughts and the emotions felt. Thank you Susan for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


Sweetly presented and challenge met...Heart-full work.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Susan

3 Months Ago

:-) Thank you Chris.
Yee-doggies, Susan 🌻
You really took Bad Bunny's form and made it sing and dance with warmth and sweet sensuality, spot-on rhymes, excellent imagery, and perfect counts, all in powerful scintillation to the senses … I know he's gonna love it, too, just as I do.
Isn't his Stepladder form a wonderful challenge and loads of fun to compose in. It's the most original and entertaining form I've come across in a long time, and it's contemporary to the hilt … what a picture choice, too, to set the ohhh-so tantalizing mood. ; )

Ya really done super good, Lady Poet … a big HUG to You! ⁓ Richard 🍃

Posted 4 Months Ago


Susan

4 Months Ago

Aw thank you Richard for this awesome review. As always, much appreciated. THANK YOU for introducing.. read more
not a big "form" fan...but i like this one...the way it was put together created a nice momentum....
and it is sensual without being blatant...it suggests...
and we feel it.
nicely done, Susan,
j.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Susan

4 Months Ago

Thank you!!! Just having a little fun with "Bad Bunny's" new form... hope all is well with you.

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