Take Me ~

Take Me ~

A Poem by Susan


Take Me!


Strong hands

softly caress along ...

surround in wanting embrace,

oh-MY!


Commands,

whisp'ring sighs ~ sweet love's song;

'pon every garment ... unlace;

let fly!


Our plans’

hot passions naught prolong.

Quick! Close the door,  just in case …

outcry!

© 2019 Susan


Author's Note

Susan
STEPLADDER
an original poetic form created by:
Robert "Bad Bunny" Trakofler ©2019

A brilliant form, worthy of the most skilled writer’s efforts,
Stepladder is composed of 3 Quatrain verses minimum.
Line counts are: 2/6/7/2, 2/6/7/2, 2/6/7/2, etc.
Rhyme scheme is: a,b,c,d a,b,c,d a,b,c,d

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This is highly smile worthy. The format assures a pleasant flow. I enjoy the lighthearted topics mixed with truly brilliant writing.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Short and sweet with hidden inuendos running though it, and if you read it in reverse it's just as good.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Susan

3 Months Ago

Hi Paul!! Thank you so muc for taking the time to read and review! I do appreciated it!!
Paul Bell

3 Months Ago

Pleasure., Susan.
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Leo
Interesting short piece..engaging and romantic..very nice

Posted 3 Months Ago


Susan

3 Months Ago

Well thank you for reading! Much appreciated. :-)
This is such a lovely write, i enjoyed the end. Nicely presented, love the format as well

Posted 3 Months Ago


Susan

3 Months Ago

Thank you kindly :-)
Ang-X

3 Months Ago

not a problem
lovely ... nice bit of humor in closing! "Quick! Close the door, ..." indeed :) pic is also very inspiring of a deeper affection and the added passions within Bad Bunny's form makes for a delightful, fanciful romance ..
E.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Susan

3 Months Ago

:-) Fun little write! Thanks for stopping by.
found dreams forming prayers answered

Posted 5 Months Ago


Susan

5 Months Ago

Hello Tate!!! :-) Thanks for stopping by.
This is lovely.
I could feel the melody in my head, stuck on replay as I read the poem over and over again.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Susan

8 Months Ago

:-) Thank you for the sweet review!
Kay Salisu Titilola

8 Months Ago

My pleasure...
WOW!! This is so very good and I enjoyed the form. Nicely done

Posted 9 Months Ago


Susan

8 Months Ago

Thank you for taking the time to read and review!! :-)
Nice poem... I got the message from you

Posted 9 Months Ago


Susan

8 Months Ago

:-) Thank you for taking the time to read and review!
Listen here young lady, you have to stop all this writing about passion and love and noises, and other stuff. It's not good for old folks like myself. It's bad on our hearts. At my age I can only dream of such things. I'll probably die in my sleep. I think my heart stopped the other night.
On the serious side, Bad Bunny is pretty cool, and you used it well.
Your words stirred the pot of passion.
A wonderful write.
Well, now it's off to see the cardiologist.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Susan

10 Months Ago

First off, you get a smile for calling me a 'young lady" :-))) As far as too old?? Nawwww, and drea.. read more
Susan

10 Months Ago

.... Thank you for taking the time to read and review! I do appreciate it.

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