Take Me ~

Take Me ~

A Poem by Susan 🌺


Take Me!


Strong hands

softly caress along ...

surround in wanting embrace,

oh-MY!


Commands,

whisp'ring sighs ~ sweet love's song;

'pon every garment ... unlace;

let fly!


Our plans’

hot passions naught prolong.

Quick! Close the door,  just in case …

outcry!

© 2019 Susan 🌺


Author's Note

Susan 🌺
STEPLADDER
an original poetic form created by:
Robert "Bad Bunny" Trakofler ©2019

A brilliant form, worthy of the most skilled writer’s efforts,
Stepladder is composed of 3 Quatrain verses minimum.
Line counts are: 2/6/7/2, 2/6/7/2, 2/6/7/2, etc.
Rhyme scheme is: a,b,c,d a,b,c,d a,b,c,d

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This is hot and sweet. I read it over and over again. Nice job!

Posted 3 Months Ago


Lovely poetry and to a Bad Bunny formula too! Sensual yet charming.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Susan 🌺

5 Months Ago

Thank you John for reading and for this review! Much appreciated. :-)
As I mentioned, I'm not into "form" poetry, but the part I love is when someone writes according to a form, but that form really doesn't matter one bit becuz the meaning of the words shines far beyond it. That, to me, would be the point in writing to form & you've succeeded here. Your words convey a depth & power of feeling that transcends whatever you were doing technically! *smile* Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Months Ago


Susan 🌺

6 Months Ago

I bet you would be wonderful at any "form" poetry :-) hint hint :-)
Steamy! Good job making something so lustful with such a strict organization. Sometimes the best poetry grows around a strict lattice work. A lot of people write freeform and don't realize the strength that comes with a well-defined form. You expressed a moment and captured it beautifully.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Susan 🌺

6 Months Ago

Beautiful review! and I apologize I missed it!!! Thank you for reading :-)
This is highly smile worthy. The format assures a pleasant flow. I enjoy the lighthearted topics mixed with truly brilliant writing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Susan 🌺

7 Months Ago

I am so sorry!!! I missed this review!! Thank you so much :-)
Short and sweet with hidden inuendos running though it, and if you read it in reverse it's just as good.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Susan 🌺

1 Year Ago

Hi Paul!! Thank you so muc for taking the time to read and review! I do appreciated it!!
Paul Bell

1 Year Ago

Pleasure., Susan.
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Leo
Interesting short piece..engaging and romantic..very nice

Posted 1 Year Ago


Susan 🌺

1 Year Ago

Well thank you for reading! Much appreciated. :-)
This is such a lovely write, i enjoyed the end. Nicely presented, love the format as well

Posted 1 Year Ago


Susan 🌺

1 Year Ago

Thank you kindly :-)
Kari (Mousey)

1 Year Ago

not a problem
lovely ... nice bit of humor in closing! "Quick! Close the door, ..." indeed :) pic is also very inspiring of a deeper affection and the added passions within Bad Bunny's form makes for a delightful, fanciful romance ..
E.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Susan 🌺

1 Year Ago

:-) Fun little write! Thanks for stopping by.
found dreams forming prayers answered

Posted 1 Year Ago


Susan 🌺

1 Year Ago

Hello Tate!!! :-) Thanks for stopping by.

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