Fragments

Your words numb me

Until you tell me

You can’t tell me

I can’t fail you

I can’t not care for you

Don’t be selfish

I don’t like the last pages of a book

I don’t want to reach the end

So I put it down and walk away

You hurt me more than most

But I love you more than most

Tell me you love me

I don’t know how to talk you

I promise I’m telling you everything

You just can’t hear it

You told me you loved me

So how could you burden me

Don’t be selfish

I see me in you

I need to save one of us

I’ll make it you

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I don't know dear Olivia. Some folk are stealers of emotion. You must save your self.
"I see me in you
I need to save one of us
I’ll make it you"
The above lines. Solid. You made the reader think. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Olivia Danielle]

Thank you so much! Your review is always a pleasure to read!!
Olivia

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Olivia.

[Wórdsmíth]

here the tapestry of art i find:

"...I need to save one of us
I’ll make it you."

love makes people unconditionally faithful but only when someone loves another soul faithfully.

[Vertigo Cat1111]

You are absolutely a true poet. I love how this one calls back to the one before and flows so smoothly. It feels like it should be in a book! It just fits so well and tells a heartbreaking, but gorgeous story. Thank you for writing so many masterpieces, and please keep doing so!

[Olivia Danielle]

Thank you so much!! This absolutely made my day, I'm so glad you liked it!

[Vertigo Cat1111]

My pleasure!! (:

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This is like another verse from the previous write as it continues the theme of broken love and struggling to grasp reality and understand just how this could be happening.