Blame;

I don't know where this road is taken me to

But, I know that your love, he loves me too

He is the one who saved my life

When I was falling, full of strife

Where were you when he called out your name

Well, I don't know but now I'm the one to blame

This is not my fairytale ending

I think it's time I stop pretending

'Cause love was never a thing he felt for me

I guess time was all it took for me to see

Sitting in my room playing oldies songs

Trying to forget all my wrongs

And wondering why I thought to say goodbye

Is the single thought that is most shy

Where was I when he called out my name

Well, I don't now, so now I'm the one to blame

This is not my fairytale ending

I think it's time I stop pretending

'Cause love was never a thing he felt for me

I guess time was all it took for me to see

There's so many things I make myself believe

I only do it so that I will not grieve

It still doesn't feel right, but I had to leave

Our love was only meant to be brief

And I saw her when you called out her name

And you're happy now, and she's to blame

Reviews

[zainul]

Very enjoyable write.
You devoted much efforts to present it to the readers.
Congratulations!!!

[Btwixer]

wow so sad, yet written and expressed so well. Enjoyed the read

[Southern Cross]

Beautiful and sad ..I hate to ever point out mistakes but perhaps this was an overlook .. ".Well, I don't now, so now I'm the one to blame" perhaps you mean to type "Well, I don't know"....Can't you just hear Taylor Swift singing these lyrics? Very sweet poem..

[Balance]

"There's so many things I make myself believe
I only do it so that I will not grieve
It still doesn't feel right, but I had to leave
Our love was only meant to be brief"

Very powerull lines. I like it that you blame the other girl in the end its a fresh end!

[kayla]

I love this poem. It has a great rhythmn to it, almost lyrical and sing-songy(if that's even a word haha). Also full of strong, deep emotions. Definately thought-out. Keep writing(: And thanks for the review.