Would It Matter At All.

Well, would it?

Would you even notice

if I wasn't here tomorrow?

Would anyone miss me?

I wish I was someone

I liked better.

 

 

If you smashed my head

against the cold shattered mirror

I wouldn't even care

the pain would feel good

for just one second.

 

 

I am happy you're here with me

I just wish I was a better person

someone you might like better.

 

 

I hear the soft whisper in the dark

seing the creatures in the dark

hiding behind the dark trees

the red eyes is like a spotlight

only directed at me

feeling the cold blowing wind on my skin.

 

I'm alone.

 

Author's Note

Ignore grammar problems.
Honest Oppinion.

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I liked this write...it was sad though...I feel like this at the moment...I just don't think anyone should ever go through this...pain does feel good sometimes...but not all of the time...I mean it's hard when you don't think someone cares about you...good write though. Thanks for sharing.

[Kelley]

Kind of reminds me of the girl in that movie"What women want." She was always thinking to herself things like this. It will get better and this will pass if it hasn't already. Great poem1 Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[Apathy To Empathy]

Alone?
Who else isn't? I mean, everyone goes through a time where the feel alone, and this time, I know I am not. I'm here. I right there with you, you ever need me. I am alone as well, but I know that as long as I keep my head albove water, I'll be fine. So will you. (I don't mean to sound rude...)

[FallenHeroXx]

Of course someone would miss you..
Me...

Fallen

[Chelsea]

Aw, this is so sad. I know this feeling of lonely.
Or feeling like nobody cared if you committed suicide. But trust me they do---- the whole hurting yourself thing. I tried it but it hurts way more---it hurts those who love you. Just saying!
You're not alone, so many people would be willing to help you!!
:)