Words.

Words.

A Poem by A Risen Heroine.
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Fake promises

Fake laughs

Fake words

Yes all in all

You’re so f*****g fake

 

 

How come they can

Make fun of my emotions?

Make fun of who I am?

Make fun of me wanting to die...

 

 

“Go kill yourself!”
That’s all I hear

that’s all I remember

that’s all I want to.

 

 

“s****y emo girl!”

I’m not emo

Yet I am emotional

Just shut the f**k up

You don’t know a thing about me.

 

 

 

“Cut yourself!”

Shut up

You don’t know

How much I wish I could

I wish I could.

 

 

“Are you okay?”

That’s all you’re saying

That’s all you can say

Yet you can’t help.

 

 

“It’s gonna be okay”

Nah not at all

It will never be okay

I won’t be okay.

 


My life

like a book with no words.

© 2011 A Risen Heroine.


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A Risen Heroine.
Ignore Grammar Problems Please.
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Great. Just......the picture of what people do. How ignorant they are. How they never try to help. How they never, ever.......can help. How they don't know a thing about a life like this, and if they did they suppressed it cause they don't want to deal with it. At least we're fighting back,. Sometimes we fall, sometimes we give up, but we still get back up. And if we're lost to this, then it is not our fault. Wonderful job, Heroine. *hugs*

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love it! One of my fav's!

Posted 13 Years Ago


If anyone say this things to you and you don't even like it, ignore them, dont say a word to them, they will just do it again and again cause they wont to see you torn apart, I mean mentally. Thats how I feel when I stand up for myself against someone bullying me, and all I feel is that they do it all once again.

This poem is really strong, and the format of it makes it even stronger! Its one of my favourite of your writing till now, nice written!

Posted 13 Years Ago


My fav out of all the ones you've written good job keep it up....

Posted 13 Years Ago


Awesome poem! I must say how creative your idea was, to cross out the lines!
I know it feels pretty s****y, huh. When people say crap like that behind your back. I sometimes get that. But annoy them, they don't know what you're going through.... Don't let it get you down.
Another great poem! Packed with emotion, truth, and so gripping!
Great job A Fallen Heroine!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like how each stanza starts off on a new note. Powerful write and your awesome. Keep writing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow, Those people that do that are pieces of crap and they dont even deserve to breathe the same air as you!!!!! You are terrific and always remember that... Wonderful poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


another amazing poem!
'My life
like a book with no words'-- I love those two lines. How do come up with such powerful lines? :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Powerful!

Posted 13 Years Ago


People who say that; just ignore them. They want others to suffer for their own amusement. You have your own choices, Don't let others choose for you. Be who you want to be, not what they tell you to be.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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