"We'll Be Forever."

Every each time he said "We'll be forever" 

I was happy... 

I believed in him...

But as he broke up... 

My whole world came crashing down...

All of those promises, plans, kisses...

Were nothing more than a long gone memory...

Third world war began, destroyed every little piece of my stitched heart... 

Nothing were left behind, nothing but my love to him..

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

Reviews

[OT]

broken promises - the dissolution of a relationship brings much with it - unfortunately mostly just the dissolution of other things -

[nevermindfan1991]

Another powerful poem about absolute love and devotion. How one feels when a relationship breaks down. Great job!

[Forest Green]

Love youtlasts disappointment; sometimes it's stronger than is practical; nevertheless it soldiers on.

Nice, expressive poem about the struggle of one. Eventually, love for self will carry us through.

[hmarieee]

I really liked this and you are a really good writer.

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Broken promises. He left your love behind. Good expression.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Love can be so magical and make our hearts sing a glorious tune and when it falls apart we come crashing down from the heavens.....perhaps that is why they call it "falling" in love. Well penned my sweet friend.

[Akshat♥]

love is so magical..
we cannot control it..
believe in yourself and be positive in life:)
poem is short and nice..thanks for sharing it.

[sarah]

Man I can relate to this the pain the feeling of betrayal such a sucky feeling great write though! Raw emotion

[Tasha]

This was beautiful and I know that feeling all to well.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Chris]

English is NOT better than Danish, French, Spanish, German, Russian, Japanese, Chinese, et al... its just that English incorporates ALL of them and gives a unique freedom to express pretty much anything.

That being out of the way. I sense English is a 'second' tongue - cool. My comment/review is about your expressed THOUGHTS not YOUR language skill.

I've wanted 'forevers' - believed in them, lived in them, hoped in them, and cried in them... and so are you - in YOUR time and dreams.

THAT is what I "Got" from your thoughts.

Take care,
Chris