Nothing Is Real

I want you to know the real me

No one really know me as well as you do

No one can ever understand me as you do

I don't want it to end this way.

I'm hitten right to my heart

I don't really care about anything

Not anymore.

Everything's so unreal

It's like, no matter what happens...

It doesn't happen at all

Even though I know it does.

I've never felt this way

It's so confusing

My mind and heart stops me.

How come I can't get rid of this?
It's tearing me apart

Dark's eating me up from within.

YOU SHOT ME!!

What would you do it I told you to stay away?

What would you do if I told you to leave me alone?

What would you do?
What would you do?

What would you do?!

My sky turned black

Yet this time it were your fault

Not mine

How I hate to admit it..

How come I can feel as terrible as I do?

I haven't cried in a few months

Yet nothing had happened tonight

It's just...

It feels like...

Nothing.Is.Real.

Nothing.Is.Real.

Nothing.Is.Real.

Nothing.Is.Real.

Nothing.Is.Real.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

Reviews

[Layla Anne Massaro]

excellent poem, keep penning. ^_^

[Thea]

The powerful emotion was so well expressed...Great job! :)))

[Valandil93]

Nice job. I really felt the feelings that you displayed here. The way it's written (font changes, etc.) really adds to it too.

[Coyote Poetry]

The healing process of love. First step is that you are pissed off. Second part trying to figure out what went wrong. Third part. Not giving a s**t. Last part falling into a new world. Where nothing seem to be real. Life and love are many lessons. Fair learn by other mistakes. Must do the dance to know pleasure and pain. I like your poem. Made my old mind think a bit. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Sometimes it seems like no matter what happens it doesn't feel real. This poem actually has a dreamlike quality to it........you are reading along and then suddenly You Shot Me! screams out at you.........then once again you are reading along hearing whispers that get softer and softer of nothing is real.......nothing is real.... Excellent!

[Carrion.]

like "inYrDreams" wonderful poem.
(epic picture...)
;D

[Becky C Strukamp]

A wonderful poem. You penned the emotions well. Excellent.

[Lily Mae]

Sometimes all that we think is real is just our perception or illusion of a dream we have... Great write..xx