"Do Me A Favour."

"Do Me A Favour."

A Poem by A Risen Heroine.
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"Do me a favour... Go slit your wrist."

What have I done to you?

I don't even know you at all

We were at the same school

That's all I know

Yet you want me to go kill myself

Why?

 

 

A feeling in my chest

Making my heart feel like stone

What's going on?

Why do you want me to kill myself?

Do you even know a thing about me?

I don't think so.

 

 

My mind aches

Why should I go kill myself?

What have I done to make you want me to kill myself?

I said what I meant.

"Life's not a game... I know that for sure.."

That's all I said..

 

 

I am who I am

You don't like it?

F**k it

I don't really care

Never gonna slit my wrist

Never gonna bow to you

F**k off.

© 2011 A Risen Heroine.


Author's Note

A Risen Heroine.
Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always~

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I like your answer to the desire of the other person. Direct and honest words. Some people need to be silence unless you have something good to say. A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


F**k Yea Man Standing up to yourself *high five*

Posted 12 Years Ago


I can not even fathom someone telling me to slit my wrist> For heavens sake, I might just do it. You have penned some incredible pain and anger here and did a great job of it.Don't slit your wrist. Thanks for writing, expressing and sharing your work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


"Do me a favour... Go slit your wrist."
What in the world?
You don't need those people! They're like a poison and will only only hurt you! You poor thing...

Posted 12 Years Ago


A poem that's demonstrative of the effectiveness of good communication or the lack of it. Delivered with a wit that resembles something more than a slitting of the wrist.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Can feel the anger, pain, fustration but I like the wisdom portrayed and thinking to overcome, the messages be it from self or otherwise :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Strong emotions in this poem
Don't blame you

Posted 12 Years Ago


Amazing poem! Love it!! This has such a strong feeling, I could feel it as I read. Your anger is shown brilliantly here. And really, to people out there who judges others so quick to the eye... they need to stop and leave them alone. Their the reason why suicide is so high around.. among other things.. but wonderful piece. ^o^ great write.
OH, and don't let anyone push you around! Yes, you are yourself. Those people who try to bring you down are nothing.. their just an obstacle. People who makes you stronger, you can get through anything. ^-^

Posted 12 Years Ago



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