F*****g Backstabber.

F*****g Backstabber.

A Poem by A Risen Heroine.
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I found this poem today xD I have no idea when I wrote it!

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F*****g backstabber

I thought you were my friend

Now I know I as terrible wrong

How come I can trust you?

We’ve been here before a few times

And I should be quiet aware of your bullshit

But I let you f**k me over

Over and over again I will get bruised on the inside

Oh Darling, don’t lie to me!

Yet you did

You kept it as a secret

You w***e

You b***h

No words can explain my anger towards you

You broke me into pieces

These puzzle pieces will never get fixed

If you ever feel like you’re lost and alone

Then you can go die and ret alone you f****r

I should have known that you’d let me down.

"We can still work it out.."

No, no we can’t

I won’t let you f**k me over

This weren’t the first time, yet it will definitely be the last.

© 2011 A Risen Heroine.


Author's Note

A Risen Heroine.
Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

I found this poem today xD
I seriously don't know when I wrote it!

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I can definitlely relate to this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


WOW. This certainly packs a punch. I love it. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Direct and honest words. Hard to trust people with secrets. Few real friends in a life. I like the ending. Don't be trick twice. Then we do play the fool if we believe the lies a second time. Thank you for a very good poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Okay, strong emotions, but I have to ask, does one have to swear when expressing anger? Its not really necessary, so avoid it. Your a poet, not a story or article writer, the means of expression is within your reach, your failing by not manipulating it in the right way.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Neato hun, neato. The anger blazes like wildfire! Loved it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awesome poem! Love the anger and feelings in this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I can feel the anger in your words...but you're right. Once a person back stabs you; its impossible to not trust them the same way as before. Sometimes we can't see that but that is how its done. Intense poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very powerfuk..emotional and yeah we all this way sometimes...so nice to let it out inpoetic form....brilliant again my friend :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I can feel the anger rising like heat from this poem. Writing is a great way to deal with your feelings, no?

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on November 4, 2011
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A Risen Heroine.
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