A Birthday Party

A Birthday Party

A Poem by Abhinav
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A birthday party,and its hidden motives

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A birthday should always be a joyous occasion,
Family and friends,the obvious invasion.
Duplicate gifts,you don’t even like,
Complain all you might,you won't get a bike

One simple day,placed on display,
Carefully observed,for signs of decay.
Dishonest smiles,they don’t mingle in truth,
As if you were the only one,losing your youth.

At such a wise age,everything seems so clear,
Excuse to celebrate,they all came for beer.
Deep down inside,you know that they care,
Your Zoo is unique,normal is rare

© 2010 Abhinav


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this was cute, but certainly not one of the best from you....still, nice job:)))

Posted 9 Years Ago


i thought the ideas were very mixed up. but a nice write anyway.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is petty cool, it absolutely describes the event, a birthday party, you really captured this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


i absolutely loved this! great job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


excellent!
lovely poem

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on March 5, 2010
Last Updated on March 9, 2010
Tags: Birthday, Party, Birthday Party, Pary

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Abhinav
Abhinav

Birmingham, West Midlands, United Kingdom



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Hey People.....My name is Abhinav and my motto is get out before they go down! I like to melt stuff...haha, not serious I love to write,play and listen to music....known to my friends as the fun.. more..

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