A Birthday Party

A birthday party,and its hidden motives

A birthday should always be a joyous occasion,
Family and friends,the obvious invasion.
Duplicate gifts,you don’t even like,
Complain all you might,you won't get a bike

One simple day,placed on display,
Carefully observed,for signs of decay.
Dishonest smiles,they don’t mingle in truth,
As if you were the only one,losing your youth.

At such a wise age,everything seems so clear,
Excuse to celebrate,they all came for beer.
Deep down inside,you know that they care,
Your Zoo is unique,normal is rare

Reviews

[Anski]

this was cute, but certainly not one of the best from you....still, nice job:)))

[MissWordSmith]

i thought the ideas were very mixed up. but a nice write anyway.

[Veronica]

This is petty cool, it absolutely describes the event, a birthday party, you really captured this.

[Red Rose]

i absolutely loved this! great job.

[Terence Foster]

excellent!
lovely poem