I love you....

An imagination of the moment when one loves someone but can't tell that fellow....it is painful,

I love u, love u a lot but don’t know how to say it,
I am colligating courage & trying to develop that wit,
The life is carrying me towards an endless journey,
Every moment I am enduring a typical agony.
Crying in heart, tying to hide tears but they are shedding,
I am striving, I am beseeching, I am begging,
Dear, I just want to give you a clue,
To make you understand that,’ I love you’.
I love you dear, love you more than my life,
But my love is eternal & not of stereotypical type,
I don’t say that always remain with me,
But if you are a vein then I wish to be the supporting tree.
I wish to be there when conditions are hapless,
I wish to be with you whenever you feel restless,
I wish to be the first one to wipe your tears,
& I wish to make you smile by alleviating your all fears.
Till my last breath I want to love you,
But don’t want anything in return from you,
Seeing your smile gives me a reason to smile,
When you say, “Thanks”, my world stops for a while.
But I want to tell you what my heart say,
Every moment what I wish, what I pray,
I wish for getting your pain, your tears, yes it’s true,
I don’t know anything; just know that I love you.
Your shining eyes seem more fascinating than stars,
Your achievements are lovely then any other rewards,
For me you are more beautiful then a rose covered with dew,
My heart; I just want to say, I love you.

Reviews

[michele vera]

There are no words to TellYou abouy How Treasured This Poem is To Me.....I Have Tell You, The Love You so Poetically Endearing Described, is The Absolute Depiction Of The Eternal Love, I Have Sought in My Life, but Most Importantly..............The Eternal Love I Desire So Truly To Give...........I Met A Very Special Man a Few Years Ago........He was and Still IS Very Much is The LOve Of My Life.....This Poem Fit How I Feel About Him Like The Perfect-Fitted Glove............I Could Go On and On, but this is a Review...To Keep This Somewhat Brief, Your Poem Moved A Thousand More Mountains For The Unending Love I Have For This Man.............Beyond Perfect Poem!!!

[The Quill]

ohh this is more than a review....i m much thankful to u ma'am for this beautiful review :) i have no words to define my happiness after this review :) thanks a lot...

[michele vera]

Iam Beond Gratefand Happy, that You RedMy Reiew..... wouldve Sid so Much More........This Was and Is The Best andMost Touching Poem I Ever Read........Your Words Touch The Deepest Part Of My Heart and Soul.......BlessAll That You Are....................

[michele vera]

So VerySorry About TheSpelling Errors......My KeyBoard is isn't working Properly! I Would'e Liked To sayA Bit More......

[The Quill]

thank you sooooo much ma'am :) may god bless u :)

[The Quill]

Spellings don't matter when feelings are there :)

[michele vera]

Very Very True, Thank You For Understanding............You Are So Very Kind............

[John Anderson]

Spelling ALWAYS matters in literature.

[The Quill]

yeah sir, i agree but most humbly i wish to say that comments are to express the feelings, it is not a literary review or proof reading..

[keatsgb]

A beautiful poem...so accurate and so eloquently penned!

[The Quill]

Thank you so much for your review :)

[John Anderson]

Why do you love the letter "u"? I'd avoid internet slang in poetry if I was you

[The Quill]

i will avoid it, sir, in future :) thanks for your review