I Do Wonder

The pain of uncertainty and fear.

I Do Wonder
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I do wonder...... About all these feelings that I have for you I wish you'd tell me what to do I do wonder...... If these feelings will ever end Or if these thoughts of you will ever die I do wonder...... What it would be like to enjoy your smile more To be able to hear your laughter-- all the time I do wonder...... About how I want to stay true But I don't know what else to do I do wonder...... Why I can't stop thinking of you Even though I really should want to I do wonder....... About me telling you what's in my heart And how your reaction could tear me apart

Reviews

[Limitality]

We often stumble across someone we cannot forget, or get over; someone we just simply need, and want so terribly. Our minds scramble, and wonder about a million things. You have perfectly pieced this together in this poem, I very much enjoyed reading this! Filled with emotion, and passion. Wonderful!

[Blogger]

Thanks! I felt that way too. She was amazing.

[Kisa Delacour]

To me, this perfectly captures what it's like to both yearn for and fear those unanswered questions and things left unsaid.
I like how what you wonder is very clear, but the reality of the situation seems so much more unclear.
So simple and beautiful.

[Blogger]

I wrote this about 7 years ago while on a trip with other people. The person who i wrote this about was on the trip and we spent some nice time together. She had no idea!

[Sami Khalil]

A very sweet and lovely poem. Thank you for sharing...:)...................

[Blogger]

Thank you Sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).......................

[Angela Proctor]

so beautiful simple and to the point but so full of emotion

[Blogger]

thank you for your kindness. I am so glad you liked it.

[EileenMarie]

Doesn't everybody wonder? Afraid of putting your feelings out there, but shouldn't we? This is great! Nice write

[Blogger]

Thank you! What you say is true.

[Kelly Scheppers]

We often hesitate upon those three little words that could change everything. I remember rehearsing them aloud, just to get a feel of their reverberation on my tongue...funny, huh? The weight of words can crush us, but so can the silence after we speak them.

Good writing, Blogger...take care!

[Blogger]

I was a bit obessesed with someone when writing this....and it likely shows. LOL

Thank you for your comment.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Hey, we've all been there...no problem! You're very welcomed.

[Blogger]

LOL Thank you for taking the time. This one is a few years old and im reposting it.

[DIVYA]

The hesitation, the doubt is very well expressed. The simplicity of words and the genuineness of emotions touches the reader. You say much and a few lines. Much appreciated Blogger.

[Blogger]

Thanks! I am very glad.

[SPINNING ON that dizzy ..]

This is good. I like the way it looks almost like notebook paper - which I think added to the innocence I get out of this pondering It is very tough to take chances with our heart. No question about it. Afraid to step off that edge :) Good write

[Blogger]

Thank you! This is an older one....but one i kept around.

[SPINNING ON that dizzy edge]

I am glad you did. It reminded me to be gentle :)

[Blogger]

Smiles....thank you.

[Matching Socks]

In my experience, best not to hold back.
Honesty all the way.
Lay it all out there.

[Blogger]

I am learning that....thank you!

[Matching Socks]

anytime. : )

[Robbie~xoxo~]

The longing and slight obsession, can lead to tumultuous emotions...

We all crave to be loved...

Sharing your true thoughts can be quite daunting, yet it is worth the risk.

Nicely penned, Sir! :)

[Blogger]

Thank you. Coming from you that means more than you know.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

It's my pleasure. :)

[Louise Ayres]

I like how "I do wonder" repeats and never progresses into something with more conviction but reoccurs persistently like an obessive thought. The way its ends made me feel that the writer will always wonder, closing on a note of fear. I really enjoyed the honesty of the content and the structure.

[Blogger]

Thank you! I appreciate your thoughts.

[Pakka sora]

This was amazing. truly.