Chapter 1- MY CLOISTERED DREAM

When i lost her...................

 

         I never saw her twice before. Don’t know how I fall for her. My soul grouse “I love you”. No idea what to do.

         Stand before a speculum and removed shirt. Looking at my naked chest. Nothing there. But too grievous. Feel better to die now.

       Is she is a part of my heart? May be that’s why I feel having a heart attack. She was gone I know. But still feel she is there in my………………………..

Is this the feeling a handicap have when he lost his right hand?

My frigid body never gives a sign of any other pain. Only a Heart breaking Lost.

She is calling me “Baby please come to me” I can hear her

I zeal i could get to her, but paralyzed. ‘Am ready "even to commit suicide to get where she is, but helpless.

 Chest got electrified. That darm shivering open my eyes. She is gazing at me. I glad to  see her again and to get where she is. We are together again.

“Baby you are back”  she hugged.

       I realized!

‘Am the one who lost for a while in to the deep hell and her prayer brings me back when doctors put their Godly hands on my chest with defibrillator paddles.

Reviews

[Anjali]

It's so beautiful! The feeling and emotions are just beautiful! Loved it. And I found the connection with your previous writings as well. Beautiful!

[Surya]

I found it connected with the last one...
Short and cute story in parts mended to form a beautiful emotion....:)

[Abraham George]

in that one he had an accident and in this he was hospitalized.

[Surya]

Yeah I can read it here, I guess I did with the terns doctors and defibrillators...

[Joey Nizz]

Wow this is really deep and emotional,

Am the one who lost for a while in to the deep hell and her prayer brings me back when doctors put their Godly hands on my chest with defibrillator paddles.

This part made me smile because it reminded me of something that happened to me in the past..

Well wrote Abraham :)
Thanks for telling me to check it out.

[Abraham George]

Thanks
Did you find that this is connected to the earlier one?

[Joey Nizz]

Kind of, it made sense when i got to the end of it, the last lines kinda clicked you know?
Was it your intention all along to do it? the connection I mean, since you wrote this one years ago? I see that it was added long ago, even if you had a new idea to connect it to an old one is till great, I really admire your creativity in writing.

[Joey Nizz]

Just wanted to say it again, both of them kinda brought back memories, im just amazed on how I can relate to this so accurately.

[Abraham George]

thanks and i am happy that you found the connection

[Joey Nizz]

Your welcome, and yeah..

[Najam Us Saher]

Very emotional....I read first and last love too and these lines brought a smile on my face....
The time when I am on my knees for another girl will be to tie
our daughter’s shoelaces. Will u let your child call me dad.
Very heart touching...I really liked the story..
Why do fate brings people together and drifts them apart...?

[Abraham George]

they didn't separate. Finally they get together

[Najam Us Saher]

In heaven..?

[Abraham George]

‘Am the one who lost for a while in to the deep hell and her prayer brings me back when doctors put their Godly hands on my chest with defibrillator paddles.

[Najam Us Saher]

Oh yeah I read that....