Bee & Flower & Sun

Bee & Flower & Sun

A Poem by Aethereal
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A relationship between a flower and a bee.

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Bee & Flower & Sun
 
Touch my pretty petals of desire
little humble bumblebee.
Taste me as you lick my nectar's fire.
Set my inhibitions free.
 
Underneath the rising sun
where we merge from two to one.

© 2013 Aethereal


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Haha, awesome. I've always thought that bees were probably a bit too naughty, as you've remarkably brought out with this poem :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aethereal

8 Years Ago

Thanks, Abdul! Necessity is always naughty.
Oh! This had me blushing, Aethereal. That naughty little bee... Angi~

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aethereal

8 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, Angi!

Bumble stumbles where she may
each and every s.. read more
the nature of it all in the lines of this one...simply put in the lines...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aethereal

8 Years Ago

Thanks for your insightful review, Glen!
Glen Yumang Manese

8 Years Ago

You're welcome...at times simplicity says more...
What a lovely interpretation of nature!


Posted 8 Years Ago


Aethereal

8 Years Ago

Thanks Kelly! This poem is also in the short style that you experiment with.
Nature at her simple best and you capture the moment so splendidly !

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aethereal

8 Years Ago

Thanks, tom! There are an infinite number of such moments in Nature.
Tom

8 Years Ago

So true and every one a gem !
A mathematician not only counts numbers,
She also enjoys a bee while loving a flower.

Enjoyed the wonderful piece.
Congratulations,Aethereal!!!


Posted 8 Years Ago


Aethereal

8 Years Ago

Thanks, zainul! And the bee does her geometric dance that tells all her freinds in the hive where to.. read more
zainul

8 Years Ago

You are most welcome,lovely friend.
Yes,the bee is not dancing like Mohammad Ali to defeat th.. read more
Short, but by no means lacking in metaphoric imagery or a strong sense of passion. Nice flow.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aethereal

8 Years Ago

Thanks, S.L.H.! This is the shortest poem that I've written so far.
Bee, and flower making honey love... I so loved this, simple but so deep metaphor, for I lately asked myself, how does the bee, brings the honey to the honeycomb? where does the real process come out off? the mouth, or the a*s? you know, interesting poem, you remind me of it again, I should google it but have to run right now, but couldn't resist to review this one.... it has metaphor, love, slight erotic, nature, all aspects in it like it should....
Beautiful one! oh we love insects... for they bring thoughts.
Bug hugs

- Elisa

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aethereal

8 Years Ago

Thanks for you detailed 'bug hug' review, Elisa! A honeycomb is a baby bee nursery as well as a Quee.. read more

8 Years Ago

It's indeed to be seen in these two ways you name.... You're welcome... Anytime...
a very sensual write...buzzing with that feeling of love...and letting go of inhibitions.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aethereal

8 Years Ago

Thanks, jacob! F'lowers know what Busy buzzy bees enjoy most.

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Tags: bee, flower, sun, passion, nectar

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