Final Hour

Final Hour

The final hour
Of the final day
Is never too far away
Our lives are fragile
We need to be more aware
Of the amazing miracle
That is life itself
If we were more reverent to life
And the beautiful wonderful
World that we lived in
We couldn't even imagine 
Harming each other
Or harming another thing
We would understand
And comprehend
That every life is precious
Every life is fragile
And yet life is strong
Even in its fragility 
Just when you think
You have got a hold on it
Life has a way of surprising you

Reviews

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Well done there!^

[Ahmad Cox]

I am glad you could appreciate it.

[luviva]

just great.... straight to the point and caries the message.. loved it to bits

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you. I had a feeling you would like this one

[luviva]

it just gets u thinking about your life better... u knw when u realise that there might b a final hour, the nasty surprises... its soooooo good

[Ahmad Cox]

Yep. Life and death are intertwined

[Steven Cash]

Interest ing

[Bumble]

You captured what life is really about. Wonderful poem.

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you.

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you. I really appreciate that. I know that I never feel like my poetry actually comes from me. But I can tell that you have gone through your share of trials and that you have a good heart yourself

[Junert]

You must know a deal about life. Your words are pure and wise.

[ba_mcfarlane]

Kudos for a great write. I love stuff that conveys substantial theme with deceptively simple prose. It is what I always try for; keeping the overwriting where it belongs, not in the poetry.

[afra]

beautiful ...absolutely loved it ...well done