Who has time..

Who has time..

A Poem by Dr Ayaz chandio
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well,just wrote as i observed about life,me and world..i write in very simple tone. and i like to experiment too..so i would love to receive your positive and constructive critics.

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Who has time...?
in this busy fast life
and damn practical world,
everyone is lost
in struggling for a better life
that the life
yes ,the real life is lost somewhere,

in childhood,
it is lost somewhere in the boring classrooms,
under the burden of home work and studies,

in adulthood,
it is lost in struggling for
a successful career and searching for a job,

later on ,
it is lost in office,
in working hours ,in meetings and late sittings,
and then onwards
in repentance of being old too early,

the real life is lost,
in every manner,
in search of something
that is supposed to be a better life,

who has time to think ?
why is so important such a better life
at the cost of our own freedom
and our own dreams,and happiness ?

who has time ?
to learn the hardest and longest lessons
of the history and wisdom?
who has time to think
about such system and societies ?
created by ourselves in a way
that deprive us of the beauty of life
who has time to get rid of this ?
who has time ?
to stop by and ask,"am i really happy" ?

this life is worth living by the one,
who has time..................................!!!

© 2013 Dr Ayaz chandio


Author's Note

Dr Ayaz chandio
well,just wrote as i observed about life,me and world..i write in very simple tone. and i like to experiment too..so i would love to receive your positive and constructive critics.

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Your words hit the mark, for evaluating our lives. Is this all there is? You think if you go the prescribed route, that here is nirvana in the end, a rainbow, but there is just more of the same and by then, too old and worn out to do anything about it.. that's why society wants conformists, they can't stand the thought that a rebel may have a better way, a more rewarding life. A true seeker will be ostracized, because misery loves company.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Yeah, I'm thinking I do have time but I don't think to ask these. You seem to be a 'life' person.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

7 Years Ago

we are all "life persons" ,we just need to let our self live the beauty of life fully.
thanks.
Junert

7 Years Ago

Yeah I agree.
Another very thought provoking piece which challenges us to consider the real value of life.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Dr Ayaz chandio

7 Years Ago

Thanks dear....
we have to understand the meaning of life....before trying to give any meaning.. read more
Very true to life….Who has time these days? Who set the lock of life at such a ridiculous pace?
Very well written. I enjoyed the read.


Posted 7 Years Ago


Dr Ayaz chandio

7 Years Ago

thanks dear..i truly appreciate your presence and views here.
Contemplative journey through a lifetime .
Reflecting on time as a service
But service costs...
and time is priceless:)
Thanks

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

7 Years Ago

thanks for sharing your views dear.
poetry-kiddo alienbaba

7 Years Ago

yes
Living and loving every minute of it seems to be a lost art...but we can find the time to live if we we can find our own hearts and souls.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

7 Years Ago

agreed dear..thanks for sharing your views.
Wow, so true... I have no time left. There's homework, and then I guess I have a couple hours a day, but that goes away too... hmm... We really need a reform of some sort. They should start with schools. Schools need a major reform.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Dr Ayaz chandio

7 Years Ago

:)
Yeah your words defiantly hit the right spot, this was a very good intriguing poem. I greatly enjoyed this read alot!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Dr Ayaz chandio

7 Years Ago

Thanks dear.
Wow, I actually really like this poem! It has a great message or a rather morale behind it. You conveyed your feelings well to point out the fact that we all are missing out the "real" fact and aspects of life. All of those processes you described, are part of life. It's true, we don't have time to figure out more about our society or history of the past. We have more things to do like school or working. Some questions are left unanswered about life, because we don't have time to solve them or figure them out. Thank you for sharing and making me ponder about such an important topic! :) I look forward in reading more of your work.

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Dr Ayaz chandio

7 Years Ago

thank you so very much dear Ashley. you are welcome.stay blessed.
Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect

7 Years Ago

You're very welcome! And thank you :)
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Roe
amazing write

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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