Don't let the sun go down

Don 't let the sun go down

Don't let the sun go down
Don't let it go down in your heart
Don't wait for the light to go out
Keep the light shining
Keep it shining in your soul
So that when night comes
The light in your heart
Will shine the way

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and powerful poem. I like the positive feel of the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sunny Skye]

I enjoyed this poem a lot. It was short but said a lot. Thanks for the excellent read. Good job!

-SkyeBlanco

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you

[Sunny Skye]

My pleasure. Keep up the good work!

[Allycat]

this poem has a good message, excellent job!

[Ahmad Cox]

I have appreciated your comments

[Barbara Walker]

A good metaphor for the ups and downs of life!

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you

[Steven Cash]

Sounds really nice. Big ups Ahmad

[Cerise]

I found it very touching..its very calming and soothing..very nicely written..:)..specially the last line..:D

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you

[Tai Ryens]

Spiritual and meaningful as it is; I'm not sure if I'm capable of reviewing a piece like this; whereas emotions get in the way of critique. After all, this is not my usual nor preferred genre of writing. I guess I'll just say that you've done a nice job, and to keep up the good work.

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you

[Amanda]

I really like this because it provided me with a great visual and I can relate. Fantastic job

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you

[Cynthia Man]

I like the positive feel of the poem, there's always a sun within us, Even although sometimes it might go down, but then the sun will always rise again.... Nice Poem!

[Ahmad Cox]

Yep its always there

[Sirius King]

very nice

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you