Lolipop

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you my dear
are as sweet as a lolipop
giving me such a treat
every time we speak

i go to you
in need of sugary goodnes
because you my dear
as are sweet as a lolipop

Author's Note

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Reviews

[dontwakeme]

This made me giggle.

[Marie]

that is very sweet...as in your lover. "Lolipop" is spelled "lollipop."

[MandaBear]

aww this is so sweet :) Love it great write :P

[Dark Aeris]

Maybe I'm just in a rare good mood since I totally had a "awwwwwwwwwwww that's adorable!!!!" girly moment. O__o

Weird.

Regardless I like this poem. :D

Just one thing, "goodness" has TWO s's[ s-es? Idk how to write s in plural form...]