Be Positive

we waste our lives thinking what will happen next and we never try to be happy at present...

 
The way you see the world might be different than others

Life is tough you feel 

People are obtuse you think

Living in this way might bring you down

Try to learn from the things you see around

Everyone has some kind of difficulties in life

Live with a positive frame of mind

If you try to make everyone happy 

eventually that happiness comes back to you

Help someone in need because you will never know

Don't crush yourself from inside 

You hate your life,

while someone dreams of having your life

You need to be strong

You need to be calm

You will get everything with time

Author's Note

Honest views please...I appreciate your time :)
rate it also :)

Reviews

[Vria P Crow]

"People"

1. I love the R a i n b o w effect of deliciousness. For me, the Rainbow refers to the following:

(1) Gay Rights
(2) Unity
(3) Art

PICTURE

1. EXCELLENT source of inspiration! It makes us feel something rather than pity. It makes us feel...connected.

"strong"

1. The blue color represents:

(1) Strength
(2) Calm
(3) Beauty

FONT OF CHOICE

(1) Orange tends to be about summer and amazing suns.

MUSIC SUGGESTIONS for HAPPYNESS

1. Sublime
2. Ballyhoo
3. Slightly Stoopid

"You will get everything with time"

1. Excellent message!
2. We all tend to feel fear.
3. We all tend to feel self-pity.
4. We all tend to feel sadness
5. We all... will r i s e up!

VOCABULARY I ENJOYED:

1. Happy: Gives positivity :)
2. Abstruse: It gives the poem intelligence.
3. Dreams: It gives us hope!

CONCLUSION

1. Mission accomplished!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Vria P Crow]

You are welcome:D

[Akshat♥]

No problem heart hacker lol :D

[Vria P Crow]

LMAO HAHAHAHAHA So much love in the air like a little Harry Potter snare:P

[Akshat♥]

I wish to become little harry Rofl :D

[Vria P Crow]

dirty harry

[Vria P Crow]

:P

[Akshat♥]

not a dirty one...just a sweet one lol :D

[Vria P Crow]

We need an instant messaging system here:P

[Akshat♥]

Someone please add a messaging system here :P

[msharma]

A message giving note,a revival of those who have buried themselves with their infirmities. Great n inspiring.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Leslie Philibert]

This is a poem that will be liked a lot, good job

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Bakor War]

this poem empathizes with what everyone feels nowadays - that they arent good enough. An honest read.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Valentine]

Well thought out and well written..it makes a person stop and think about their own life..Valentine

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Mazie Tackett]

loved this write. Inspiring poem too. Thanks for letting me read it I don't think my work was near as good. i liked that your always keeping it real

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Loner]

An awesome write friend as always .....
a great emotional punch u have given us through this great
write.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Norma M Sutton]

I like it. This one line reads a little rough, but otherwise it's great :)

eventually that happiness come back to you

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Erinne S.]

First off, I love the photo you chose for this piece. I love Will Smith!
Second, this poem is beautiful and I totally agree with the message behind this piece. Well done!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Krystal Nicole]

Great write. Love the picture at the beginning. Fits the poem perfectly!! Loved it!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[sudeshna]

it is really full of positivity...
touched my heart

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)