Going too far

Sometimes we feel so stressed and in so much complications.. that we think to go somewhere silent and feel fresh:)

I am going too far away

Away from reality

Away from expectations

Away from tensions

I want to fly

Flying higher that anyone has ever flown before

Clearing my mind,

thoughts,emotions...

and reach the top of the sky

No crowded place

No polluted air

just me and only me there

No more questions to ask

No more answers to say

I am going too far away

No one can ever reach me

I wake up with a full sun

and sleep with a full moon

I want to know how far I can go

These days seem like a dream

just think what might have been

But now I am going very far away

Author's Note

I have written this to show that we can feel free whenever we want to...
review and rate it...i will really appreciate it:):)

Reviews

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Freedom of imagination. Freedom to escaping reality. That's what makes a poem interesting. The extent of the imagination.

"I wake up with a full sun
and sleep with a full moon"

This speaks well for it. We can make it to places that others can't see or see it impossible. We all can make that possible. Great poem you have written.

[Tolik vasilev]

I just flew in my dream on a last night. It was wonderful. And so is your masterpiece. Well done!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[mou]

It is wonderful!
True, sometime to give an assurance to the helpless heart, we try to find a lonely place where even shadow of own is not allowed.You beautifully portrait the sorrow and tough blow of life, with which every reader can relate .
Thanks for sharing.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Anamika]

Hi, the poem is good, it sounds a bit naive though

[Akshat♥]

explain why...thank you?

[Anamika]

I don't know how to explain, it speaks of your need to be free, but it's not expressed well, I think you do better. but that's just my opinion.

[Akshat♥]

Okay, thank you:)

[smilempsn]

aahaan... The poem title almost said it all.. But that was such a elaborated write....
That's just the think I want..!!

I think
'No more questions to ask
No more answers to say' (No more answers to reply)
would fit perfect :)

That was an amazing piece Akshat.. ThankU for sharing ^-^

[Akshat♥]

Thank you for the review dear :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

I love the concept of becoming free from everything and everyone. I think this is a concept that most of us can embrace. A few grammatical errors:

Fly so high that no one has ever done before (Flying higher than anyone has ever flown before) makes it flow better and has correct grammar.

and reach top of the sky (and reach the top of the sky)

just me and only me be here (just me and only me there)

This is a well done piece with lots of great visuals and concepts. Well done.

[Akshat♥]

I have corrected my mistakes :)
I think very deep so visuals are always there ;)
Thank you dear :)

[beautiful life]

Lovely write up!!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Dakshta]

Ah if only one could find a place far away, it would have been so great...A nice write :)

[Akshat♥]

Yeah...away in a place where we can get some peace ..only fresh air :)

[Dakshta]

YuP :)

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

No more questions to ask
No more answers to say
search for freedom...well penned :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Glee]

I like the flow and that you maintained the theme of the poem - the act of escaping.

These two lines were particularly remarkable:

I wake up with a full sun
and sleep with a full moon

And the conclusion equally to the task.

[Anuvart]

nicely witten :)