Nobody to blame

I don't know what came to my mind at that time..I just wrote it see if you like it:)

         










                     Here we go
                    There we stay
                    Its not the  emotions
                    that we blame


                   Feelings of suffocation 
                   that we contain


                   We always like the others way
                   killing ourselves from inside
                   now who is to blame



                                 We confuse ourselves 
                   but in reality everything is simple

                   Sometimes we move fast
                   Sometimes we stay
                   Its just the decisions that we make

                   Life gives us so much
                   We just never consent to it

                    We always want more
                     more than others

                     We never realize it
               Somebody else doesn't even get this

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Christina May Shanaberg]

I have had a poetic vision, unwritten for years, and you wrote it. My vision was of two men walking on a road and coming to a point where they had to choose one of three roads; one through a forest, one over a mountain, and the other along a beach. The first man chose the easy way, the beach. The other chose the mountain. The first man finished the journey, before the day was done, and sat for three days waiting for the other. When the other arrived with cuts and bruises covering him he smiled at the other man, whom wondered why he'd been so foolish. The mountain man smiled and said, "For the last three days, I lived, while you sat waiting for life to come be you on a beach!" Great write!!

[Coyote Poetry]

In the end. Every person want more or less. Understanding is a hard thing to grasp. Better to walk softly and be kind. Many people seeking the same and many wanting enough. Thank you for a excellent poem. I enjoyed the poem. Type of poem that create emotion and thoughts.
Coyote

[K.C. Zbryk]

I like the format that you chose for this piece, it gave it a different flow, and forced the reader to focus on the words. I also liked the closing line. It has a nice strong impact on the reader. Brilliant choice of pictures as well

[CT]

The organization of the piece is certainly unique, and it conveys a powerful emotion message within. The pictures you chose compliment as well. Good job.

[Blessed_Angel]

good job keep up the good work. I want to see more form you :) . I give 100%

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Honestly a amazing poem i really like the picture it kid of capture the whole tuing nice job keep it up

[Jazique]

I'm honest and being honest and that is that I love your pics and your words were wonderful and true. Its the blame game, we point fingers all day long but, at the end of the day does it matter? Is it really only one person to blame? We all relate this and at least once in our life pointed the fingers at someone like my lil cousin dose to me all the time even when I'm not there. As truth seems to be irrelevant at times your words were relevant in our lives and reality. Excellent writing and keep up the awesome work.

[Jessica Alvarez]

good job.

[Jupiter Jazz]

Cool pics. It suits your poem

[Sarah E. Pearson]

this is really, really good. great write.

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

I liked the subject matter, and the photos you chose go with it very well.