Daddy, please

Daddy, please

A Poem by AleyshaRosa
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A poem I hoped I'd never have to write

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Daddy, please

Please release

 

Your unreasonableness

Your unforgiving

 

And let me come home

Come home to my abode

 

Where I belong

It’s been so long

 

Do you miss me?

Do you cry for me?

 

Don’t you see the truth?

Deep beneath the muse?

 

Daddy, please

 

I beg of you

 

Let me come home.

 

 

© 2013 AleyshaRosa


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Soft, rich with emotion and carries a deep ring of sadness to it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


this is just so sad and i love how you put how you put such a painful thing into this short poem. its a very powerful poem. hope to read more from you. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


A painful reality that nobody should have to endure, yet so many of us must. You're not alone in this predicament. Well-said and well-written.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Beautifully sad my friend, I felt the loss and pain in this one, you write from your heart, I can say.

Home is were you will be one day.... and together. You have a fine pen...

- Elisa

Posted 6 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AleyshaRosa

6 Years Ago

Sigh... I hope so...

Thanks, Elisa

6 Years Ago

I hope it to for you dear xx
I figure you'll have to get the muse ... to get you home. Nice write.

Posted 6 Years Ago


a sad thing to write....but hopefully some good can come out of it

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Tags: sad, loss, deperation, love, forgiveness, home

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AleyshaRosa
AleyshaRosa

Abbotsford, BC, Canada



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Canadian, eh? I've been writing since I was 13 (I'm now 18) and have recently started back up on writing a novel that I'm now half through. I mostly write prose poems and short stories with a tonne .. more..

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